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摘 要:新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)對(duì)中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作要求越來(lái)越高,但寫(xiě)作也是中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)綜合運(yùn)用能力中的一大瓶頸,必須予以高度重視。正反觀點(diǎn)闡述的英語(yǔ)作文屬于議論文。該題型一般要求在表述他人對(duì)某個(gè)問(wèn)題或某件事的不同評(píng)論的同時(shí)表明自己的觀點(diǎn)或態(tài)度。
關(guān)鍵詞:新課改;英語(yǔ)正反觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)作文;教學(xué)案例
【學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)】
1.學(xué)習(xí)正反觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比類(lèi)作文常用句式;
2.掌握英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作步驟;
3一句多譯練習(xí);
4.提高學(xué)生寫(xiě)作能力
任務(wù)一:英語(yǔ)正反觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)作文常用句式
【課前預(yù)習(xí)檢測(cè)】我不懂,我要問(wèn)
1.導(dǎo)入部分:We had a heated discussion about Opinions about ...are divided/Different people hold different ideas/opinions
2.表達(dá)觀點(diǎn):Some are for(贊成) the idea.../...of them hold the opinion/think that.../...of the class are in favor of (贊成)the idea that...
3. 不同觀點(diǎn):However,... of them hold a different view that .../hold the opposite (相反的)opinion./People who are against it dont think so.
4.表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn):In my opinion, /As far as I am concerned...
任務(wù)二:英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作步驟
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步驟:1-6,(1)審題;(2)翻譯要點(diǎn);(3)連詞成句;(4)連句成篇;(5)潤(rùn)色;(6)檢查抄寫(xiě)。
任務(wù)三:實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練鞏固
【師導(dǎo)生學(xué)】我學(xué)習(xí) 我明白!
實(shí)戰(zhàn)操練:最近,你校同學(xué)正在參加某英文報(bào)組織的一場(chǎng)討論。討論的主題是:公園要不要收門(mén)票?請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提供的信息,給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封信,客觀地介紹討論情況。(60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為不應(yīng)收門(mén)票:(1)公園是公眾休閑的地方;(2)如收票,需建大門(mén)、圍墻,會(huì)影響城市形象。40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為應(yīng)收門(mén)票但票價(jià)不宜過(guò)高:(1)支付園林工人工資;(2)購(gòu)新花木)
1.審題
(1)確定文體:正反觀點(diǎn)議論文;(2)討論主題:公園要不要收門(mén)票;(3)確定人稱(chēng):第三人稱(chēng);(4)確定時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、將來(lái)時(shí)必要時(shí)用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。
2.翻譯要點(diǎn)
(1)收門(mén)票(charge entrance fee);(2)公眾休閑的地方(a place for the public to rest and enjoy themselves);(3)建大門(mén)、圍墻,影響城市形象(build gates and walls, affect the appearance of the city.)(4)票價(jià)不宜高 (the price should not be high);(5)支付園林工人工資 (pay money for garden workers);(6)購(gòu)買(mǎi)新花 (buy new plants and flowers)。
3.連詞成句、潤(rùn)色
(1)The topic of whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks is becoming more and more popular recently .there are two sides of opinions about it/Our opinions are divided on this topic.
(2)Sixty percent of the students hold the view that entrance fees should not be charged .(同位語(yǔ)從句/被動(dòng)句)
(3)A park is a place where people rest and relax.(定語(yǔ)從句)
(4)With entrance fees charged, it will be necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance of the city.(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))
(5)The income from entrance fees is used to /is made use of pay the gardeners and buy new plants and flowers.(高級(jí)詞匯)
4.連句成篇
【達(dá)標(biāo)檢測(cè)】小組來(lái)比賽 Come on!
給出這篇作文的范文,去除所有連接詞、過(guò)渡句以及插入語(yǔ),讓學(xué)生做挖空練習(xí)。并總結(jié)英語(yǔ)作文中常用的連接詞和過(guò)渡句。
First,Second,Third,Last /Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly,F(xiàn)inally(表示特定的順序關(guān)系) What is more;Besides;In addition:To make the matter worse(表示遞進(jìn)) I think/ I firmly believe that ...In my opinion,/Iin my view(表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的用語(yǔ))
5.檢查抄寫(xiě)
任務(wù)四:歸納總結(jié)
(正反觀點(diǎn)式議論文模板我學(xué)習(xí),我快樂(lè))
Recently weve had a heated discussion about whether we should...there are two sides of opinions about it.
Most of the students are in favor of it. Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally... However, the others are strongly against it. Their reasons are as follows. In the first place,...Whats more...In addition
Personally,the advantages overweigh the disadvantages,for it will do us more good than harm,so I support it.
【作業(yè)布置】
下面是你班班會(huì)上以“中學(xué)生是否能佩帶手機(jī)”為題進(jìn)行討論的情況。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封信給21st Century報(bào)的編輯說(shuō)明該情況,并表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)。
參考文獻(xiàn):
[1]王瑾.新課改下高中英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作教學(xué)的思考[J].中國(guó)科教創(chuàng)新導(dǎo)刊,2010(27).
[2]王春霞.高考英語(yǔ)作文得高分之我見(jiàn)[J].基礎(chǔ)教育論壇.2010(08).
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