李平梅

摘 要：高中英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)的教學(xué)效果不理想，本文介紹一種形象易懂的“高富帥”三招寫作方法以改變學(xué)生書面表達(dá)的寫作困境，提高教學(xué)效果。

關(guān)鍵詞：書面表達(dá);改進(jìn)

書面表達(dá)是語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)的輸出環(huán)節(jié)，也是一種創(chuàng)造性的活動(dòng)，是學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的難點(diǎn)，更是老師教學(xué)的難點(diǎn)。一方面，沒有扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)、足夠的語(yǔ)言輸入和良好的寫作習(xí)慣，學(xué)生的習(xí)作猶如脫韁的野馬，不受英語(yǔ)詞法、句法和語(yǔ)法的約束，自由馳騁在漢語(yǔ)思維下的發(fā)揮，導(dǎo)致一篇習(xí)作錯(cuò)誤百出，學(xué)習(xí)效果差。另一方面，教師的教學(xué)任務(wù)繁重，無(wú)法對(duì)所有學(xué)生的所有作文逐一批改，學(xué)生的錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)和寫作習(xí)慣得以固化，教學(xué)效果極差。有什么方法可以改變這種教與學(xué)的困境呢？那就是把英語(yǔ)寫作與改結(jié)合起來(lái)，先改錯(cuò)，再改進(jìn)。

下面介紹“高富帥”的三招寫作技巧，讓同學(xué)們的習(xí)作“脫貧致富”起來(lái)：

第一招用詞：低級(jí)淘汰，高級(jí)替代（高）

Chang’e was the first person who arrived there.

→Chang’e was the first person who set foot there.

第二招造句：脫貧致富，復(fù)起來(lái)（富）

富1代：用上定語(yǔ)從句或非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞

In China， we believe that there is a beauty on the moon. Her name is Chang’e.

→In China， we believe that there is a beauty on the moon，whose name is Chang’e.

→In China， we believe that there is a beauty named Chang’e on the moon.

富2代：用上狀語(yǔ)從句或獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)

New Year is around the corner. We are going to hold a New Year party for you. It is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture.

→As New Year is around the corner， we are going to hold a New Year party for you， which is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture.

→New Year being around the corner， we are going to hold a New Year party for you， which is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture.

富3代：用上名詞性從句或并列句

Chang’e-4 probe has landed on the moon successfully. People in China are so excited .

→People in China are thrilled at the news that Chang’e-4 probe has landed on the moon successfully.

→Chang’e-4 probe has landed on the moon successfully and people in China are so much thrilled .

富4代：用上強(qiáng)調(diào)句或倒裝句

①The dream of flying to the moon inspires Chinese people to make continuous attempts to explore the moon.

→It is the dream of flying to the moon that inspires Chinese people to make continous attempts to explore the moon.

②Our club’s works will be displayed， and we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field .

→Not only will our club’s works be displayed， but we alse have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field .

第三招卷面書寫：干凈整潔，帥哥美女來(lái)（帥）

注意單詞拼寫正確，書寫規(guī)范，使用衡水體，字跡工整，卷面整潔，正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，卷面干凈整潔美觀。

以上三招簡(jiǎn)稱“高富帥”，用一句話概括即寫作詞匯高級(jí)、句式豐富、卷面美觀。掌握這三招，學(xué)生的寫作水平可以有效實(shí)現(xiàn)從難產(chǎn)到順產(chǎn)乃至高產(chǎn)的突破。