張福彥
書面表達主要考查學生的英語運用能力和語言表達能力。只要我們準確使用語法和詞匯清楚、連貫地表達,要想寫好書面表達是很容易的。筆者從以下幾個方面幫助學生理清寫好書面表達的思路,希望對大家以后的寫作有所借鑒:
1. 正確使用簡單句的五個基本句型
1.1 “主+謂”結構
例如:(1)She works in a factory.(2)Tom walks to school every day.
1.2 “主+謂+賓”結構
例如:(1)She looked after the baby carefully.(2)I had seen him before.
1.3 “主+謂+間接賓語+直接賓語”結構
例如:(1)The teacher gave me some advice. (2)His father bought him a bike.
1.4 “主+謂+賓+賓補”結構
例如:(1)We call him Tom. (2)We found him unhappy.
1.5 “主+系動詞+表”結構
例如:(1)The boy was frightened. (2)He became a teacher.
2. 巧妙使用非謂語動詞
2.1 動詞不定式(to do)除了不能做謂語,其他任何句子成分都可充當
例如:(1)It is very important to lean English.? ?(2)He attended to go to see a film.
2.2 動詞-ing形式(doing)
例如:(1)A sleeping pill will help you to fall asleep quickly.
(2)While working, they listened to the songs.
2.3 動詞-ed形式
例如:(1)We have read many novels written by this author.
(2)Confused by the problem ,he decided to turn to his teacher for help.
3. 大膽使用復合句,使用復合句是判斷書面表達含金量的重要標準之一
3.1 名詞性從句
例如:(1)What he wants to tell us is not clearly.
(2)Thats why he didnt come to the meeting.
3.2 狀語從句
例如:(1)I was just reading a book when she came into my room.
(2)If it rains tomorrow, what shall we do?
3.3 定語從句
例如:(1)Is he the man who wants to see you?
(2)That is the building which stands at the foot of the mountain.
4. 高調(diào)使用特殊句式。特殊句式有強調(diào)句型和倒裝句
4.1 強調(diào)句型:It is (was)+被強調(diào)部分+that從句
例如:(1)It was in the street that I saw him yesterday afternoon.
(2)It wasnt until his father came back from work that he did his homework.
4.2 倒裝句
例如:(1)Only by doing sports could we keep fit.
(2)Not only did he come, but also he brought us good news.
5. 勇敢使用光彩諺語,恰當使用英語諺語可以點亮書面表達
例如:(1)As the saying goes “An early bird catches the worm.”
(2)As the saying goes, “No cross, no crown.”
6. 列舉一篇范文,綜合運用寫作技巧
假如你是李華,你的美國朋友Tom給你寫了一封電子郵件,問你在學校里的學習和生活情況。請你給他回復一封電子郵件,把自己在校的情況給他介紹一下。
內(nèi)容包括:
(1)早上做早操;
(2)課堂上老師教給我們很多知識;
(3)課后我們做有趣的游戲;
(4)在學校餐廳吃飯,食物很美味。
注意:(1)詞數(shù)100左右;
(2)可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。
Dear Tom,
Im glad to introduce my school life to you. In my school, the students life is colorful, we do morning exercises in the morning. In class, our teachers teach us much knowledge, which we cant learn from our parents. The teachers are kind and friendly, helping us do a lot of things, thanked by us and our parents. After class, we often play some interesting games. It is the games that can build up our bodies. When it is time for us to have meals, I buy food in the school dining room, so do you, right? We like to eat the delicious food, I like my school life. Do you like it?
Best wishes
Yours
Li Hua
(作者單位:貴州省安順市大洋公學)