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一、命題預(yù)測(cè)

命題人可能要求考生寫一篇關(guān)于購(gòu)物經(jīng)歷或談?wù)摼W(wǎng)購(gòu)利弊的短文。

二、常用短語(yǔ)

1. discount折扣

2. change零錢

3. shopping mall/centre購(gòu)物中心

4. department stores 百貨商店

5. second-hand stores舊貨店

6. cyber ordering 網(wǎng)絡(luò)訂購(gòu)

7. fake products 假冒商品

8. on-line shopping 網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物

9. poor/ high quality糟糕/優(yōu)異的質(zhì)量

10. poor service 糟糕的服務(wù)

11. buy in group 團(tuán)購(gòu)

12. wrap up包裝

13. pay in cash以現(xiàn)金支付

14. pay by credit card通過(guò)信用卡支付

15. free of charge不收費(fèi)

16. be all sold out /out of stock售空

17. avoid being cheated 避免受騙

18. bargain with attendant和服務(wù)員砍價(jià)

19. effective and convenient 高效率、方便

20. complain to sb about sth就某事向某人投訴

三、套用句式

1. It is effective and convenient for you to do some shopping on the net because you neednt go out of your home. 因?yàn)椴槐赝獬?，網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物方便高效。

2. It is the custom for people to have a vocation and to buy various things for the New Year at the end of the year. 人們往往在節(jié)假日或年末時(shí)大采購(gòu)。

3. All kinds of delicious food and colorful gifts attract peoples attention， especially for our children. 各種美味食物和豐富多彩的禮品吸引人們尤其是孩子的注意力。

4. The supermarket is crowded with people from both the city and the countryside. 超市里擠滿了來(lái)自城里和農(nóng)村的人們。

5. Youd better take the price， the quality and so on into consideration when buying. 買東西時(shí)你最好要把價(jià)格、質(zhì)量等因素考慮進(jìn)去。

四、習(xí)作修改（做短文改錯(cuò)，背經(jīng)典范文）

In recent year a lot of young people buy goods， book holidays and rent videos through the internet. People have different attitudes towards online shopping. Some think online shopping was more convenient and the goods sold on the Internet are cheap. However， others believe it is safe to buy goods with credit cards on the Internet and it is impossible to check the quality of the goods. Id prefer going shopping in traditional ways. I think it is a fun to walk into the shops and looking at various goods on sale. We can choose that we really need and even have a good bargain. Besides， we can talk freely with the shop assistants and acquire a great deal useful information. I often go shopping with my parents on weekends， when I enjoy very much because it offers a chance for us to exchange idea while shopping.

五、課堂練習(xí)

假設(shè)你是偉明，看到某英文報(bào)“讀者專欄”正在就是否該為正讀中學(xué)的孩子購(gòu)買電腦的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你以一名學(xué)生的身份向該報(bào)編輯寫一封英文信。主要內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

1. 表達(dá)你贊同購(gòu)買電腦的觀點(diǎn)。

2. 請(qǐng)給同意購(gòu)買的家長(zhǎng)提出一些建議，如計(jì)算機(jī)的實(shí)用性、價(jià)格、質(zhì)量、售后服務(wù)等。

注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右。

2. 可以適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。

Dear editor，

Im a student of Senior high school...

Yours，

Wei Ming

[過(guò)程指導(dǎo)]

第一步，認(rèn)真審題。

1. 審文體：本文是屬于說(shuō)服性質(zhì)的短文（persuasive essay）。

2. 審時(shí)態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

3. 審人稱：以第一人稱為主。

4. 審要點(diǎn)：

（1）提出自己的觀點(diǎn)：贊成父母為中學(xué)生買電腦；

（2）給建議：購(gòu)買電腦時(shí)需考慮注意的問(wèn)題。

提醒：每次開(kāi)始寫作前，要從頭到尾默讀寫作任務(wù)的所有要求，包括情景說(shuō)明，以及出題人已經(jīng)給出的文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾。

第二步，確定結(jié)構(gòu)。

可按題目要求的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)分段，考慮布局，并根據(jù)情況增加細(xì)節(jié)，進(jìn)行拓展。

1. 第一段：提出觀點(diǎn)；給出支持觀點(diǎn)的理由。

2. 第二段：給出建議。

第三步，考慮語(yǔ)言表達(dá)。

1. 第一段，表明身份，開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山表明觀點(diǎn)，給出理由。

Im ... I suppose /think/ guess ... be of great use in ... be available to /get /search for information/ what we need on the ...whats more /besides/ in addition， ...

2. 第二段，給出購(gòu)買電腦似的建議或注意事項(xiàng)。

When doing something， ... take...into consideration ... be important factors. .... last/ last but not least， ...

第四步，寫初稿，然后修改，再認(rèn)真謄寫。

六、課外作業(yè)

假如你正在書店購(gòu)書，你對(duì)“Around China”和“Olympic English”這兩本書愛(ài)不釋手，但你只有40元。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面兩本書的相關(guān)內(nèi)容（contents）進(jìn)行比較，分別選擇購(gòu)買其中一本，陳述你的理由。

Around China：

Prices： 39 yuan

Contents： the history， culture， places of interest about China

Olympic English：

Prices： 27 yuan

Contents： English and knowledge about the Olympic Games

要求：1.內(nèi)容連貫，有理有據(jù)。2.詞數(shù)要求：120左右。

I will buy...

參考答案與范文

四、習(xí)作修改

這是一篇有關(guān)網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物和傳統(tǒng)購(gòu)物方式不同觀點(diǎn)的短文。一些人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)購(gòu)便利，價(jià)格優(yōu)惠，但也有人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的質(zhì)量難以保證以及資金賬戶的安全性問(wèn)題。作者更偏好傳統(tǒng)購(gòu)物并列舉了原因。

1. year→years因In recent years 應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

2. was →is 整篇文章都是有關(guān)人們購(gòu)物態(tài)度的現(xiàn)狀，所以都應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。

3. cheap →cheaper這句是網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物與傳統(tǒng)購(gòu)物的比較。用比較級(jí)。

4. safe→unsafe 或在is后加 no與前一句內(nèi)容相反的觀點(diǎn)，對(duì)網(wǎng)購(gòu)的安全性表示質(zhì)疑。

5. 去掉fun 前的a因fun 是不可數(shù)名詞。

6. looking→look 與walk into是并列成分，應(yīng)該是同樣的形式。

7. that→what因choose后的賓語(yǔ)從句we really need缺少賓語(yǔ)，故用what引導(dǎo)。

8. deal后加 of 固定短語(yǔ)：a great deal of 后接不可數(shù)名詞。

9. when→which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，指代的先行部分為前面的整個(gè)句子。

10. idea→ ideas 因不定式to exchange ideas的邏輯主語(yǔ)是 for us，因此應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

五、課堂練習(xí)

Dear editor，

Im a student of Senior high school. I suppose our parents can buy computers for us senior students now. As we all know， computers have been of great use and will be more and more popular in our future daily life， with which we can search for more information on the Internet. In addition， computers are of great help in our studying，for there are piles of learning software we can use. When free， we can play computer games to enjoy and relax ourselves. When used in a safe way， it will not harm our sight and its worth the money we spend on them.

When buying a computer， we should take its practical value into consideration. The price and the quality are also important factors. Last but not least， you should make sure that the service is the best in case it will break down one day.

Yours，

Wei Ming

六、課外作業(yè)

1. I will buy Olympic English. It is said that learning a new language can open up another world. I am also able to understand a new way of life. So I want to learn how to speak English well. Furthermore， the 2016 Olympic Games will be held in Rio De Janeiro（里約熱內(nèi)盧）， Brazil， which is said to be a mysterious country. Besides Olympic Games， I am eager to know something about the host country. This book will not only teach me a lot about the Olympic Games， but also supply me with knowledge about the host country. And it is cheaper than Around China. Therefore， I think its better for me to choose Olympic English.

2. I will buy Around China. Though it is a little more expensive than Olympic English， I believe it is a more careful and worthwhile choice. I am interested in traveling. And I dream of going sightseeing throughout China in the future. As a Chinese youth， proud of my motherland， I have to get myself equipped with as much information about my country as I can. The book is just the one full of knowledge about Chinese history， culture and places of interest， which can take me into a wonderful world. At the same time， reading Around China is a great way to relax. So I will decide to buy Around China.

（作者單位：廣東深圳市松崗中學(xué)）

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