Hi， everyone！ Believe it or not， I like sports very much. I have threebasketballs. I play basketball every day. After class， I always play basketball and淤my classmates. I think it’s relaxing and easy for me. I also have four footballs.And于I don’t play football. I only watch it on TV. It’s difficult. I don’t have avolleyball. I think it’s boring. I like playing table tennis best， because tabletennis is our national game. Sports are good to盂us. It is interesting to play sportsevery day.

優(yōu)點(diǎn)：

這是一篇談?wù)擉w育用品及體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的短文。小作者先是概述自己非常喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，接著再具體展開介紹擁有的運(yùn)動(dòng)物品及相關(guān)觀點(diǎn)，最后總結(jié)全文，呼應(yīng)開頭。此外，本文靈活運(yùn)用了多個(gè)句式，增加了不少亮點(diǎn)。總之，本文是一篇成功的學(xué)生習(xí)作。

需要修改的地方院

①and 改為with。表“和某人打籃球”用介詞with。

②And 改為But。上下文表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系要用But。

③to 改為for。be good for 是固定短語，意為“對(duì)……有好處”。

評(píng)分院

按中考英語作文滿分20 的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，本文修改前可得18 分。