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When you are about to set out on a journey， always attend to the details to ensure that it will be trouble-free（沒有麻煩）and enjoyable. Here are some main travel tips for you to better prepare your trip in Macau.

Do you know who the receiving agency（機構(gòu)） is？

It is very important to have the contact details of the receiving agency in advance， so that you can contact them if necessary. Only licensed travel agencies and tour guides are qualified to receive tour groups in Macau. Tour buses must indicate the identity of the receiving agencies， while tour guides must wear their tour guide cards issued by Macau Government Tourism Office.

Which sightseeing activities are included in your trip？

Macau has a rich historical and cultural heritage worth enjoying. Check your itinerary to know which places you will be visiting， so that you can prepare yourself for a satisfying visit.

How will meals be arranged（安排） during your journey？

Macau features many licensed restaurants offering numerous cuisines and delicacies. Find out what the meal arrangements are to ensure that they suit your preference.

Planning to go shopping

All kinds of goods and souvenirs are available in Macau. When choosing goods， remember that the price is generally directly proportioned to the quality even though steep discounts may be offered. Macau has a free market economy， prices are set by individual retailers（個體零售商）. The same goods may be offered at different prices by different retailers. Remember to check the terms and conditions before you make the purchase， and ask for a valid receipt with the seller’s information afterwards.

Friendly reminder

Respect local customs， and maintain good order and personal hygiene（衛(wèi)生） to enjoy a comfortable journey. During your visit， be sure to show care to the environment by no littering or spitting， following traffic rules， keeping the pedestrian walkway accessible to passers-by， no queue-jumping， talking in a gentle manner while visiting scenic spots， showing care to cultural and historical relics， and complying with the no-smoking regulations （規(guī)定）at designated areas.

This advice is offered in the hope that it will help you enjoy a wonderful time in Macau！

Tasks

1. Pay attention to the underlined sentences， read them aloud and discuss the word order with your partner.

2. How many travel tips are mentioned in the passage？ Which do you think is the most important？

3. Travelling is very popular. What should we do while travelling？

Writing

You may have been to many places， which impressed you deeply？ Pick a place and make a chart to organize your ideas. Then write an introduction.

原文呈現(xiàn)

Travelling to Taiwan

Travelling is a good way to relax ourselves. For me， it’s also a chance to enrich myself. Among all the places I have been to， the most meaningful one is Taiwan.

I went there in 2018， when I was in Grade 1. It was" "strange that I could remember the trip clearly. We rent a car and drove around the island， which took us about half a month. During this trip， we saw the sea and mountains， we’ve been to cities and villages. We went there during summer holiday， which is the most beautiful season in Taiwan， and all of us enjoyed ourselves.

Our first site was Taipei Palace Museum. We saw thousands of works of art， porcelains， and other precious things. I was fond of their beauty and we really had a good time there. Even now， it’s an unforgettable experience.

However， the most satisfying place we’ve been to， was a village in Gao Xiong. I’ve enjoyed the environment there. We planned to spend three days there， and I felt really relaxed. The sun rise was wonderful， and it made me think of nature.

After that， we also had many amazing experiences， and all of them seemed meaningful. If I had chance， I’d rather choose to go back to Taiwan than any other choice. What a wonderful trip it is！

第二段邏輯順序有些亂，可以按照時間先后調(diào)整一下語序。

第三段描寫的是人文景觀，第四段描寫的是自然景觀，可作為兩個并列的點去描寫臺灣之行最難忘的兩個地方。

首尾需呼應(yīng)。結(jié)尾段要體現(xiàn)本次旅行帶來的收獲。

升格展示

Travelling to Taiwan

Travelling is a good way to relax ourselves. For me， it’s also a chance to enrich myself. Among all the places I have been to， the most meaningful and unforgettable one is Taiwan.

Although I went there five years ago， I can still remember every detail of the trip clearly. We went there in summer， which is the most beautiful season in Taiwan， and all of us enjoyed ourselves. We rent a car and drove around the island， which took us about half a month. During this trip， we saw the sea and mountains， we’ve been to cities and villages.

We went to the famous Taipei Palace Museum as our first site. We saw thousands of works of art， porcelains， and other precious historical relics. I was fond of their beauty and we really had a good time there. The experience opened a new world of history for me. Even now， it is unforgettable.

Meanwhile， another satisfying place we’ve been to， was a village in Gao Xiong. I spent three days enjoying the environment there. The wonderful scene there helped me find my inner peace.

After that， we also had many amazing and meaningful experience. I’ve learnt a lot and the trip is really meaningful to me. What a wonderful trip it is！

（南京師范大學附屬中學樹人學校 徐希言；指導(dǎo)教師 吳娛）

綜合點評

升格后的文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，從旅行的基本信息到人文景觀再到自然景色，層層遞進，情感逐步加深。小作者使用了大量形容詞，使整篇作文猶如一幅畫卷，在讀者面前徐徐展開。在寫作手法上，小作者也能熟練運用各類復(fù)合句正確表達自己的所思所想。

主" 持" 人：祖瑞 正高級教師，江蘇省特級教師，任教于江蘇省南京市將軍山中學