When it comes to what I want to be in the future，I will say without hesitation that being an engineer is my dream job. When I was a little boy，I always dreamt that I could fly the plane in the sky which is made by our own team. Also，I think it is an honor for me to play a role in the development of China.

To realize my dream，I think I should make an effort to study and develop effective learning methods. Besides， developing good study habits can help me improve. More importantly，I should also keep a positive attitude， which can benefit me a lot.

As the saying goes， “Where there is a will， there is a way.”I believe that l will make my dream come true one day through continuing efforts.

河南省鄭州市第四十七初級中學

指導老師 王麗榮

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作者依次講述了自己的夢想是成為工程師、為什么想成為工程師以及現(xiàn)在應該從哪些方面努力來實現(xiàn)自己的夢想。習作詞匯豐富，句式多樣，如運用賓語從句、定語從句、動名詞做主語、to do不定式表目的等。