安徽 吳安運(yùn)

★話題概述

關(guān)于旅游與交通的話題有很多，比如：旅游常識、詢問與預(yù)訂、交通規(guī)則、問路與指路、安全條例與標(biāo)志識別等。針對本話題，中考命題專家可能會從以下角度來命題：

1.旅游計(jì)劃的擬訂，旅游物品的準(zhǔn)備及注意事項(xiàng)。

2.酒店、景點(diǎn)機(jī)（車）票等的預(yù)訂及費(fèi)用。

3.國外旅游注意事項(xiàng)。

4.度假方式的變化及其原因。

5.描述旅游經(jīng)歷，談?wù)撀糜胃惺堋?/p>

6.問路與指路。

7.私家車激增的利與弊。

8.交通方式的變化及其對人們生活的影響。

9.交通安全。

★高頻詞語

1.相關(guān)名詞

traffic交通，travel旅游，journey旅行，trip旅行，tour旅游，travel agency旅行社，guide向?qū)?，airline/airway航空公司，flight ticket飛機(jī)票，passport護(hù)照，visa簽證，identity card身份證，tent帳篷，camp露營，hotel旅館，tourist attraction旅游景點(diǎn)，places of interest名勝，scenic spots景點(diǎn)，national park國家公園，DIY tour自助游，space tourism太空旅游，group/organized tour團(tuán)體游，a self-driven trip自駕游，speed limit限速，red light紅燈，parking lot停車場

2.動詞短語

take a flight乘飛機(jī)

go on a trip出游

see sb.off給某人送行

be on holiday/a visit度假；旅行

go on a wildlife tour/a hiking trip參加野生動物之旅/去遠(yuǎn)足

explore a forest/a desert探險森林/沙漠

enlarge one's knowledge增長知識

3.相關(guān)形容詞

interesting令人感興趣的，exciting令人興奮的，attractive吸引人的，comfortable舒適的，funny有趣的，fantastic極好的，safe安全的，dangerous危險的，different不同的，close to在……近旁，crowded擁擠的，boring/dull無趣的，tiring無聊的，far from遠(yuǎn)離，more and more越來越……，wellorganized有序的

4.交通方式

walk/on foot走路；步行

ride a bike/by bike騎自行車

drive a car/by car開小轎車

take a bus/by bus乘公共汽車

take a taxi/by taxi乘出租車

by boat/ship/water/sea坐船（走水路）transfer（在旅途中）轉(zhuǎn)乘（換乘）

5.交通詞語

safety first安全第一

traffic light交通燈；紅綠燈

traffic rules/regulations交通規(guī)則

keep left/right靠左/靠右

crossroad/crossing十字路口

wait until the green light等到綠燈再走

traffic jam交通堵塞

traffic accident交通事故

★經(jīng)典句型

1.Life will be more colorful if we travel.旅游可以使我們的生活更加豐富多彩。

2.Traveling makes us close to the nature.旅游可以使我們親近大自然。

3.It makes me know the world better.它會使我更好地了解世界。

4.They also think that traveling is good for their health.他們也認(rèn)為旅游對健康有好處。

5.There are some people who aren't fond of traveling.有些人不喜歡旅游。

6.These daystraveling is becoming more and more popular.最近旅游越來越受歡迎。

7.We can make friends with people from different places.我們可以和來自不同地域的人們交朋友。

8.From these points，we can see that traveling is really a good activity.通過這些，我們可以了解到旅游真的是一項(xiàng)很好的活動。

9.The train is crowded sometimes and passengers have to sit for a long time.坐火車有時候會很擁擠，而且乘客們要坐很長時間。

10.When we travel on a train，everything we see will leave quickly.當(dāng)我們坐火車旅游時，看到的東西會一閃而過。

11.Most of these cannot be found from our textbooks.這些中的大部分在我們的教科書里是不可能找到的。

12.I suggest that we have more policemen working at the crossroads.我建議應(yīng)該要有更多的警察在路口執(zhí)勤。

13.Only in this way will they not break the traffic rules again.只有這樣，他們才不會再次違反交通規(guī)則。

14.Traffic in cities is getting heavier and heavier.城市的交通變得越來越擁擠。

15.Great changes have taken place in the ways that people spend their holidays over the period from the year...to...在……年至……年間，人們的度假方式已經(jīng)發(fā)生了巨大的變化。

16.Large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams.大量的游客涌到動物園會導(dǎo)致交通堵塞。

17.However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons.然而，其他人更喜歡出去旅游，因?yàn)檫@既可以增長知識，又可以開闊視野。

18.We can enjoy many world-famous places，such as...我們能欣賞許多世界級名勝，比如……

★寫作模板

Ladies and gentlemen，

Welcome to _______！

I feel honored to be your guide to the_______.First of all，I'd like to express my welcome to all of you.

Our schedule for today is to visit the famous scenic spot—the ________，which is_______.I'm quite sure that you will be impressed by _______and the long history of the city as well.Wish you have great fun during the whole day！

OK， next， I will show you around the whole _______and introduce it in detail to you.

★題例解讀

假如你是北京的李麗，下周你在哈爾濱讀中學(xué)的表妹李蘭要來北京旅游。請根據(jù)以下提示，給她寫一封信，并告訴她在北京旅游期間要做一名文明的（well-mannered）中學(xué)生。

寫作要點(diǎn)：

1.歡迎她來北京。

2.介紹北京的情況

（1）下周天氣：白天最高溫度超過33℃。

（2）交通方式：最好乘坐地鐵。

（3）必去的名勝：長城。

3.對她在北京旅游期間如何做一名文明的中學(xué)生提出具體建議。

寫作要求：

1.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

2.字跡工整，語言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰。

3.至少80詞。Dear Li Lan，

How are you doing？________________

Best wishes！

Yours，

Li Li

【題目解讀】

1.審題立意

本文為提綱式說明文體裁。文章要求你就“文明旅游”這一話題給表妹寫信，要求簡要介紹北京的情況并告訴她在北京旅游更需要講究文明。在寫作時，你不僅要把題目中所給的信息寫出來，而且要能適度發(fā)揮，這樣寫出來的文章才會內(nèi)容豐富，有血有肉。

2.信息要點(diǎn)

（1）表示歡迎。

（2）介紹北京的情況。

（3）必去的名勝。

（4）如何文明旅游。

3.注意事項(xiàng)

（1）本文屬于說明文，文章所用的時態(tài)要以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主。

（2）可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但切忌直譯要點(diǎn)造成信息的簡單羅列和堆砌。

（3）注意保持行文連貫，使文章富有條理性和邏輯性。

【佳作賞析1】Dear Li Lan，

How are you doing？ ①I'm pleased to hear that you'll come to Beijing for a journey.Now I will tell you something about Beijing.

The highest temperature will be more than 33℃during the daytime next week.②After your arrival at Beijing，you are advised to choose the subway as yourmain transportation since it can take you almost anywhere you want to go in Beijing.③As for the places of interest you must go to，it must be the Great Wall.

④While traveling in Beijing，keep in mind that you should be a well-mannered middle school student.⑤You can throw rubbish nowhereexceptindustbins.I'm looking forward to seeing you soon.

Best wishes！

Yours，

Li Li

【名師點(diǎn)評】

本文脈絡(luò)清晰，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，觀點(diǎn)鮮明。作者首先表示了對表妹的歡迎，接著簡要介紹了北京的情況以及可以去參觀的地方，還提到如何文明旅游，重點(diǎn)信息一個不落。文中從句、介詞短語、非謂語動詞等的巧妙運(yùn)用，使文章達(dá)到語言精練、言簡意賅的效果。特別是多處恰當(dāng)?shù)赜玫搅诉^渡詞句，使文章語言更加自然、流暢。

①這是書信類寫作的慣用語句，表示一種客套。

②巧用了名詞arrival，簡潔但更顯新意。

③過渡詞句，將上下文很好地銜接起來。

④“連詞+分詞”結(jié)構(gòu)用得很好，這句話同時還是一個過渡句。

⑤此句遠(yuǎn)勝過一般的表達(dá)方式（You can't throw rubbish everywhere.）。

【佳作賞析2】Dear Li Lan，

How are you doing？I'm glad to hear that you will come to Beijing next week.Since this is your first visit to Beijing，①I'll offer you a brief introduction to Beijing.

Duringthedaytimenextweek，the highest temperature will reach more than 33℃.②So，you are advised to take a subway which is cool inside and convenient to take.③One of the places of interest in Beijing you must go to is the Great Wall，which is wellknown all over the world.During the trip，we must behave well，④never throwing rubbish everywhere，drawing orcarving on the walls.⑤With so many places available，I believe you will have a good time here.

Best wishes！

Yours，

Li Li

【名師點(diǎn)評】

本文涵蓋了所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：先是對表妹的歡迎，接著寫下周北京的天氣，然后建議表妹出行方式的選擇及好玩的地方，最后交代旅游期間的注意事項(xiàng)，特別是文明舉止方面。全文條理清晰，行文連貫。另外，在句式的使用上，靈活處理，句式多樣，讓文章增色不少。

①此句用法高超，比“I'll introduce Beijing to you.”的表達(dá)效果要好得多。

②在由which引導(dǎo)的定語從句里還有兩個并列的表語，使得句式豐富多彩。

③再次連用了兩個定語從句，可以看出作者對英語句子結(jié)構(gòu)的熟練掌握。

④連用了三個現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語，比連用兩個簡單句或兩個并列句的效果要好得多，簡潔但不簡單。

⑤“with+賓語+賓補(bǔ)”結(jié)構(gòu)，這一高級結(jié)構(gòu)使文章更加緊湊，行文更加連貫。

【參考范文】Dear Li Lan，

How_ are_ you_ doi____ng？I'm pleased that you'll come to Beijing for a journey.Now let me tell you something about Beijing.

The highest temperature is more than 33℃during the daytime next week.And you can go anywhere by subway，because it's very convenient and cheap.As an old saying goes，“He who doesn't reach the Great Wall is not a true man.”So you shouldn't miss climbing it when staying here.

To be a well-mannered middle school student during your travel，you should put rubbish in dustbins.Besides，you should behave well and try your best to help others.

Best wishes！

Yours，

Li Li__

★寫作嘗試

寒假就要到了，你父母想帶你外出旅游。請根據(jù)下表提供的信息，在三個旅游地中，選擇一個你最想去的地方和適合的交通方式，寫出一份旅游計(jì)劃，并簡單說明理由。

詞數(shù)：60~80詞。

Places Temperature Price of the hotels Activities you are going to do Transportation Reasons Hainan 15℃ 320 yuan/night to the beach；swimming...Harbin -30℃ 230 yuan/night to the Ice and Snow Festival；go skiing...Guilin 10℃ 200 yuan/night sightseeing；boating...

My parents and I are going to____________________________________________________