安徽 周 輝
中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作并不回避社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題,在近幾年的中考中,社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題類(lèi)寫(xiě)作試題頻頻出現(xiàn),比如中華傳統(tǒng)文化、漢語(yǔ)熱、達(dá)人秀、學(xué)生使用手機(jī)、出境旅游、環(huán)境保護(hù)、國(guó)人熱衷洋節(jié)以及廣場(chǎng)舞等話題。
該話題的寫(xiě)作體裁多屬于說(shuō)明文和議論文的結(jié)合,有時(shí)也可以有記敘文的體裁。
My Chinese learning
With the development of China,Chinese is becoming more and more popular.As native speakers,it’s our duty to learn Chinese well.It helps us to understand Chinese culture better.
Chinese was one of the subjects when I was in a primary school.At first,I used to be weak in it,and I felt stressed out.My Chinese teacher advised me to read more books.From then on,reading played an important role in my life.I often went to the library which was near my home.I made much more progress in Chinese.
I think reading books is a useful way of learning Chinese well.Also,it’s necessary to practice writing as often as we can.Only in this way can we become a good Chinese learner.
【權(quán)威點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這是一篇介紹“我”的漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷的記敘文。全文從為什么要學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)、自己學(xué)漢語(yǔ)的經(jīng)歷和學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的方法三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行了科學(xué)合理的謀篇布局。
作者首先從正面談?wù)摿藢W(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的重要意義;接著敘述自己的漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷,話題貼近學(xué)生生活,對(duì)學(xué)生英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作有明顯的積極引導(dǎo)作用;最后提供學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的建議。整篇文章層層推進(jìn),結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,渾然一體。
文 章 通 過(guò) With the development of、become more and more popular、be weak in、feel stressed out、play an important role in、make much more progress 等詞組和 it’s our duty to do、it’s necessary to do、only in this way can we...等句型體現(xiàn)寫(xiě)作主題和要求,自然、清楚、連貫地表達(dá)了作者的思想。
社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)類(lèi)的話題作文通常以“話題引入—具體描述—解決問(wèn)題”的結(jié)構(gòu)形式進(jìn)行構(gòu)思行文。此話題涉及的內(nèi)容比較廣泛,所以每篇文章如何行文,還要根據(jù)題目的具體要求來(lái)定。人稱(chēng)多以第三或第一人稱(chēng)為主。
寫(xiě)這類(lèi)話題作文時(shí)要注意以下三點(diǎn):
1.熱點(diǎn)描述。寫(xiě)作前要審清題目,根據(jù)其具體要求對(duì)某種社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單或詳細(xì)的描述。
2.觀點(diǎn)鮮明。文章必須有一個(gè)明確的中心,然后圍繞該中心組織材料并進(jìn)行論述。
3.行文時(shí)態(tài)。描述社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)以現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主;若是特別強(qiáng)調(diào)發(fā)生在過(guò)去的事情,可以用一般過(guò)去時(shí)進(jìn)行介紹。對(duì)話題的具體分析和問(wèn)題的解決等則以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,也可能會(huì)用到現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)或一般將來(lái)時(shí)。
【高頻短語(yǔ)】
with the development of隨著……的發(fā)展,become more and more popular越來(lái)越受歡迎,make great progress in在……方面取得巨大進(jìn)步,open our eyes開(kāi)闊我們的眼界,show great interest in對(duì)……表現(xiàn)出巨大興趣,meet with any difficulty遇到任何困難,lead to/result in導(dǎo)致,deal with處理(應(yīng)付),contribute to為……做貢獻(xiàn),make a big difference起大作用(有大影響),have an effect on...對(duì)……有影響,in favor of/agree with贊成(同意),be against反對(duì)(不贊成),take action采取行動(dòng),take measures采取措施,come to (arrive at/reach/draw)the conclusion得出結(jié)論,first of all/to begin with 首先,what’s more此外,last but not least最后但同等重要,for one thing一方面,for another thing另外一方面,on the one hand一方面,on the other hand另外一方面,in my opinion/from where I stand在我看來(lái)
【典型句型】
1.There are several reasons that lead to this problem.有好幾個(gè)原因?qū)е铝诉@個(gè)問(wèn)題。
2.In my opinion,it is high time for us to take quick action to do...在我看來(lái),是時(shí)候我們應(yīng)立刻采取行動(dòng)做……
3.Only when these measures are taken can we...只有采取這些措施,我們才可以……
4.Only in this way can we...只有用這種方式,我們才可以……
5.The key to the problem is that we should take effective measures at once.問(wèn)題的關(guān)鍵是我們應(yīng)該立刻采取有效措施。
6.Whenever I come across difficulties in my...,I just take an active attitude in finding proper solutions instead of...無(wú)論我在……上遇到難題,都會(huì)以積極的態(tài)度去找尋合理的解決方案,而不是……
7.This problem has caused great concern among people from all walks of life.這個(gè)問(wèn)題已經(jīng)引起了社會(huì)各階層的巨大關(guān)注。
8.There is no doubt that...毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)……
9.We had better...我們最好……
10.In recent years,...is becoming increasingly popular.近年來(lái),……正變得越來(lái)越流行。
近年來(lái),一些西方節(jié)日在中國(guó)很受歡迎,這種現(xiàn)象引起了人們的熱議。某英語(yǔ)論壇就此話題開(kāi)展了討論,請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,簡(jiǎn)述中國(guó)人過(guò)洋節(jié)的情況和你的看法。
具體要求:
1.要涵蓋提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);
2.詞數(shù)100左右。
參 考 詞 匯 :Christmas,Valentine’s Day,the Spring Festival,the Mid-autumn Festival
【寫(xiě)作提示】
1.解讀題目
從所給的素材可以看出,這是一篇說(shuō)明和議論相結(jié)合的文章。文章首先說(shuō)明了一些中國(guó)人熱衷于過(guò)洋節(jié)的現(xiàn)象,給出了可能用到的詞匯,無(wú)須考生另外發(fā)揮。但所給漢語(yǔ)提示比較簡(jiǎn)單,這就要求考生充分理解命題意圖,在要點(diǎn)提示的框架內(nèi)靈活采用多種句子結(jié)構(gòu),清楚、流暢、自然地表達(dá)出自己的意思。
寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)的合理轉(zhuǎn)換。描述社會(huì)現(xiàn)象時(shí),要充分利用題目所提供的可能用到的詞匯。
2.列出要點(diǎn)
(1)描述一些西方節(jié)日在中國(guó)的受歡迎的情況;同時(shí)指出一些人對(duì)某些中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日的漠視。
(2)發(fā)表自己的看法。
3.精選句式
(1)重視it作形式主語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)的使用。提建議或表達(dá)重要性時(shí),it’s important/necessary that...it’s one’s duty to do...等句式的有效使用,可以讓讀者感受到自己建議的力度和重要性。同時(shí),也可以讓讀者感受到作者明確的思路和態(tài)度,容易引起閱卷者的共鳴和好感。
(2)重視固定句式的使用。英語(yǔ)中一些固定句式可以很好地表達(dá)出寫(xiě)作者的態(tài)度,例如:there is no doubt that...、hold the view that... 和 take the attitude that...等??忌鷳?yīng)熟記這些結(jié)構(gòu),它們不但可以較好地表達(dá)作者的觀點(diǎn),而且有益于文章檔次的提升。
(3)重視特殊句式的使用。部分倒裝和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型等特殊句式的合理使用可以更加突出寫(xiě)作者的想法,使得讀者對(duì)寫(xiě)作者的觀點(diǎn)產(chǎn)生深刻的印象,彰顯寫(xiě)作者扎實(shí)的寫(xiě)作功底。
(4)重視which非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的使用。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句主要用于表達(dá)對(duì)某件事的重視程度和強(qiáng)調(diào)某件事的意義、影響或結(jié)果等。只要作者認(rèn)為某件事會(huì)產(chǎn)生某種影響、意義或?qū)ζ渥龀鼋忉寱r(shí),都可以使用該句式。
【佳作賞析】
With the development of society,some western festivals are enjoying an increasing popularity in China.Every year a large number of Chinese celebrate Christmas and Valentine’s Day while some people do turn a blind eye to our traditional festivals.
From where I stand,I hold the view that we should pay enough attention to our own traditional festivals like the Spring Festival and the Mid-autumn Festival.For one thing,we can have a better knowledge of our traditional culture in celebrating them.For another,each traditional festival has its own history,which can open our eyes and enrich our knowledge.As Chinese,it’s also our duty to know them well.
Let the interest in foreign festivals pass away!
亮點(diǎn)分析:作者嚴(yán)格按提示要點(diǎn)和題目要求進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作,文章語(yǔ)言流暢,內(nèi)容充實(shí),結(jié)構(gòu)完整。介詞短語(yǔ),并列句、同位語(yǔ)從句、銜接詞匯、定語(yǔ)從句和祈使句等的準(zhǔn)確使用體現(xiàn)了作者扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。本文是一篇值得模仿的優(yōu)秀作文。
1.文章首段并列連詞while的使用使得文章的句子更加緊湊,同時(shí),通過(guò)對(duì)比,把作者的態(tài)度也鮮明地展示了出來(lái)。
2.第二段for one thing和for another的巧妙使用使文章結(jié)構(gòu)渾然一體;pay enough attention to、have a better knowledge of等短語(yǔ)及hold the view that、whichcanopenoureyesandenrichour knowledge、it’s our duty to know...等句型體現(xiàn)了詞匯的豐富多彩和句型的多樣性。
3.結(jié)尾段的祈使句簡(jiǎn)潔有力,不蔓不枝,使作者的觀點(diǎn)擲地有聲,不容置疑。
【參考范文】
Western holidays such as Christmas and Valentine’s Day are getting more popular among some Chinese,especially some young people.But at the same time,some people seem to have little interest in our traditional festivals like the Spring Festival and the Mid-autumn Festival.
In my opinion,each coin has its two sides.For one thing,we should value our own traditional festivals,which makes us more believe in our own culture.For another,the celebration of western holidays is a good way to learn the western cultures,which helps to improve understanding and communication between Chinese cultures and other cultures.
某英語(yǔ)雜志“社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)”欄目就讀者反映的“廣場(chǎng)舞擾民”話題邀請(qǐng)了讀者參與討論。假設(shè)你是李華,請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)文章參加討論。
主要內(nèi)容:
1.描述一些現(xiàn)象;
2.表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。
具體要求:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。