呂鴻妤

提示：每個人都有自己的夢想工作，并立志努力為實現(xiàn)夢想而努力。你的夢想工作是什么？為什么你選擇這樣的夢想工作？你要如何實現(xiàn)這個夢想呢？請以My Dream Job為題，結(jié)合課本知識及自身實際寫一篇英語短文。

要求：80詞左右。

My dream job is a fantastic job for many people. I want to be a journalist. And Im going to study hard to make my dream come true.

First， Im going to write articles and send them to newspapers and magazines. I am going to practice writing something when I have free time. Then， I want to study at a university in Beijing when I finish high school. I will try to get good grades at the university. After that， I want to work at a TV station and travel around the world with my good friends.

As long as I try my best to do what I want to do， everything will not be difficult for me.

【簡評】本文主要描述了小作者的夢想工作，My dream job is a fantastic job for many people. I want to be a journalist. 開篇點題。主體部分根據(jù)自己的實際情況，分別描述目前、高中以及大學畢業(yè)后，制定切實可行的目標為之努力。同時也教育了那些沒有理想和目標，有些迷茫的同學，這是本文的成功之處。從語言的使用角度來說，不但使用了一些生動的動詞，準確的名詞，同時使用了時間狀語從句，條件狀語從句和賓語從句。

指導(dǎo)教師：王靜

My Dream Job 劉佳怡

Everyone has his dream job. My dream job is to be a doctor，because I think it is the greatest job in the world.

As we know， health is money. But in modern life， many people are not good in health. If I am a doctor， I will help people get rid of their diseases. If I am a doctor， I am going to save peoples lives. If I am a doctor， I will try my best to bring happiness to others.

Then how am I going to do that？ First， I should study hard and do my homework carefully every day. Next I will go to college after high school. Finally， I will work for patients in a hospital in Beijing. I believe my dream will come true one day.

【簡評】本文是一篇有關(guān)職業(yè)夢想的作文，有了夢想，生活才會有目標。小作者充分運用了所學單詞、句型、條件狀語從句以及一般將來時態(tài)。用first， next， finally分3點來說明為夢想工作所做的努力，條理清晰。最后緊扣主題，既是總結(jié)又是方向。小作者采用的是總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)，中心明確，是一篇值得借鑒的佳作。

指導(dǎo)教師：曹麗霞

編輯/丁俊玲