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It is said that the 21st century is the Information Age. With the great changes that the Internet gives us，it seems that nowadays a man cant live without the Internet.But what actually caused that？

Firstly，the Internet makes people closer. Using the Internet，we are able to communicate our family，our friends or whoever we want to keep in contact with at any time we prefer.

Secondly，we are given more changes to get to know our world well. Also，we are not going to miss any information by the Internet.

Lastly，we can not only reveal our inner worlds but express our feelings as well by making full use of the Internet so as to meet new friends.

It is no doubt that the Internet plays an important role in our life， and however， it sometimes is harmful to our life，too. So，how to use the Internet to assist ourselves will become a hot spot in the near future.

教師點評：文章主題明確，重點突出，條理清晰。文章首先說了網(wǎng)絡拉近了人們之間的關(guān)系，便于交流；第二說明我們有更多機會了解到更多信息；最后，說明我們可以通過網(wǎng)絡認識更多的朋友。雖然文章不長，但是開頭比較吸引人，每一點都敘述的很清楚，幾乎沒有什么語法錯誤。

（指導老師：曾平英）