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提示作文（一）

為了使同學(xué)們與人交往時(shí)更受歡迎，學(xué)校將舉辦以“How to Be popular”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)備一篇發(fā)言稿。

要點(diǎn)如下：

1.確保自己健康，保持整潔，對(duì)人友好；

2.培養(yǎng)對(duì)他人的體貼，助人為樂(lè)；

3.要做自己，對(duì)他人真誠(chéng)；

4.請(qǐng)你就此話題再補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)個(gè)人看法。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)60～80，短文的首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.不要逐字逐句翻譯。

參考詞匯：

friendlyadj.友善的； considerateadj.體貼的； sincereadj.真誠(chéng)的

How to Be Popular

Fellow students,I’m glad to share my opinions about how to be popular with you.

提示作文（二）

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)介紹李明：

1.李明是我的同學(xué)，性格外向，樂(lè)于助人，和大家相處得十分融洽；

2.他特別愛(ài)聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，每天花很多時(shí)間聽(tīng)英語(yǔ)，甚至在做家庭作業(yè)時(shí)也帶上耳機(jī)聽(tīng)音樂(lè)；3.他的父母認(rèn)為做作業(yè)聽(tīng)音樂(lè)不好；

4.就此談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)（至少兩點(diǎn)）。

注意：

1.字?jǐn)?shù) 60～80詞；

2.不要逐字逐句翻譯。

參考詞匯：

earphonen.耳機(jī)； do harm to對(duì)……有害； concentrate onsth.全神貫注做某事

圖表作文（一）

假如你是三年一班的王林，你所在學(xué)校的“愛(ài)心俱樂(lè)部”（Helping Hands Club)將吸收新會(huì)員，你想加入該俱樂(lè)部。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格和圖示信息，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封自薦信。

本人特點(diǎn) 身體健康；學(xué)習(xí)刻苦；樂(lè)于助人；與同學(xué)相處友好平時(shí)表現(xiàn) (見(jiàn)圖片）加入目的 ……（寫(xiě)出兩點(diǎn)）

要求：

1.要點(diǎn)須包括表格和四幅圖片中的提示信息；

2.詞數(shù)60～80。信的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Chairman,

I am a boy student from Class 1,Grade 3.I’d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club.

I will be glad if I am accepted.I am waiting for your answer.

Yours,

Wang Lin

圖表作文（二）

請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹你和你的好朋友泰拉(Tara)的相同和不同之處。詞數(shù) 60～80。

不同點(diǎn) 相同點(diǎn)泰拉（Tara） 1.比我高，更強(qiáng)??；2.喜歡聽(tīng)音樂(lè)會(huì)； 1.喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)；3.每天鍛煉。 2.各門(mén)功課都學(xué)得好；我1.喜歡看電視； 3.喜歡閱讀，通常在周末一起去圖書(shū)館。2.每周鍛煉三次。

應(yīng)用文（一）

假設(shè)你是Emma，你的筆友Josh給你寫(xiě)了一封電子郵件，向你傾訴他在家里的一些煩惱。請(qǐng)根據(jù)來(lái)信和提示，給Josh回一封電子郵件。先說(shuō)說(shuō)你的看法，再給出建議，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

要點(diǎn)如下：

1.看法：在父母看來(lái)，我們?nèi)允呛⒆?，父母這樣做是為了保護(hù)我們；

2.建議：給父母寫(xiě)信談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ鲃?dòng)幫你父母做些力所能及的事情。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)不少于60詞，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.回信應(yīng)包括以上所有提示的信息，做到行文連貫，不要逐字翻譯。

To: Emma@help.com Subject: Ask for your help Send|Save|Print|Forward Dear Emma,I have a problem and I need your help.My parents are really strict and never let me do anything!For example,when I go out with my friends,my mom always asks,“Where are you going?Who are you going with?”My parents want to control everything I do.I try to talk to them,but they don’t listen.They say,“This is our house and these are our rules.”Why is it so hard for them to understand me?Josh

Dear Josh,

Thanks for your e-mail.I have ever had the same experience.I even had a fight with my parents.But now,I understand them.

I hope this helps!

Emma

應(yīng)用文（二）

Jenny邀請(qǐng)Eliza參加她星期五晚上的生日聚會(huì)，但Eliza的父母不在家，奶奶臥病在床，需要照顧，而且她還要準(zhǔn)備下周一的數(shù)學(xué)測(cè)驗(yàn)，因此，她無(wú)法前去參加聚會(huì)。請(qǐng)你以Eliza的名義給Jenny寫(xiě)一封信表示辭謝。詞數(shù)60～80。

2013年第9期參考答案

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寫(xiě)作篇——提示作文

提示作文（一）

One possible version:

Fellow students,I’m glad to share my opinions about how to be popular with you.First,we should always make sure that we keep ourselves healthy,neat and tidy.We should also be friendly to others.Another important point is to have more consideration for others.We should always be ready to help others.Third,we must remember to be ourselves and be sincere to others.

For me,I think it’s also important to be a good listener and we should never talk about others behind their backs.If we can do all of the above,I am sure we will be popular.

提示作文（二）

One possible version:

Li Ming is my classmate.He’s outgoing and always ready to help others and he gets on very well with his classmates.He likes listening to music very much.He spends a lot of time listening to music,even while doing homework.His parents think listening to music is not helpful when he is studying.I agree with his parents.It’s really difficult for him to concentrate on study while listening to the music.On the other hand,listening to music with an earphone too long is bad for ears.

圖表作文（一）

One possible version:

Dear Chairman,

I am a boy student from Class 1,Grade 3.I’d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club.I am healthy.I work hard at my lessons.I like helping others.I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessons.On my way home,I often help old people cross the street.On the bus,I always give my seat to those who need help.Sometimes,I pick up rubbish in the park.

If I join the club,I can do more for others.Besides,I will be able to make more friends.

I will be glad if I am accepted.I am waiting for your answer.

Yours,

Wang Lin

圖表作文（二）

One possible version:

Tara is my best friend.In some ways we are the same.Both of us like sports and are good at our subjects.We both like reading,and we usually go to the library on weekends.But in some ways we are different.She is taller and more athletic than me.She likes going to the concert,but I like watching TV at home.I only exercise three times a week,but she does exercise every day.

應(yīng)用文（一）

Dear Josh,

Thanks for your e-mail.I have ever had the same experience.I even had a fight with my parents.But now,I understand them.We are growing up,but often,it’s hard for our parents to see this.To them,we are still children and they want to protect us.Sometimes,it’s hard for you to talk to your parents.Here is an idea:Write your mother and father a letter.In the letter,tell your parents what you are thinking about.Then maybe they will understand you better.After your parents read the letter,try to talk to them.In your free time,you’d better do something you can to help your parents.For example,you can help your parents with some housework.What’s more,you can describe your friends to your parents and tell them more about you and your life.

I hope this helps!

Emma

應(yīng)用文（二）

Dear Jenny,

Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party on Friday evening.I’d love to go,but I can’t.My parents are not at home,and my grandmother is ill in bed,so I have to look after her.I’m also studying for the math test next Monday.I am also very sorry I can’t go to your party.

Thank you for asking me.I hope you can have a good time.Happy birthday to you!

Yours,

Eliza

初級(jí)（一）

One possible version:

A Visit to Guilin

Last summer I went to Guilin with my parents.We visited Lijiang by boat.The water was very clean and we could see a lot of fishes in the river.We also climbed the hills.The trees on the hills were very green.We had a good time and felt happy.Guilin is one of the most beautiful cities in our country.The people of Guilin are friendly.I love Guilin very much.

初級(jí)（二）

One possible version:

I Can Make Wuhan More Beautiful

Wuhan is a beautiful city and is famous in China.But something imperfect happens to it at times.So it’s important for us to make it more beautiful in some ways.

First,I should study hard to improve myself.Good education is important for a beautiful city.

Second,I should be a greener person.I must try my best to make our environment cleaner and quieter.I should plant more trees,save water and reduce pollution.

Third,I should be friendly and polite to others.When people are in trouble,I should help them as much as possible.I should obey all kinds of rules and set an example to others.

I believe“nothing is impossible”.If I can make contributions to Wuhan,it will be more beautiful in the future.

中級(jí)（一）

Dear Tom,

How are you recently?Now,I’ll tell you something about my English teacher Mr.Lee.

Mr.Lee is forty years old.He has a happy family.He’s outgoing and gets along well with us students.His classes are very interesting.After class,he often helps us with our English.He never smokes.He likes sports.He is especially good at playing chess.Most of my classmates like him and think that he’s not only a good teacher but also a good friend.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Ming

中級(jí)（二）

One possible version:

Our class has made a survey——“Don’t keep your worries”.About fifty percent of the students in our class are worried about their homework and studies.And they feel stressed too much.About thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them.They don’t often talk with their parents.The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health.They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or exercise.

Ihope thatourteacherswillgive usless homework.And I advise our parents to allow us to spend some time with ourparentsdoing outdoor activities.And I think our teachers should give us less homework to do.And our parents are supposed to talk with us often.In this way,we will be happier.

高級(jí)（一）

One possible version:

Good afternoon,everyone!As we all know,our city is our home,but we can see white pollution and street advertisements nearly everywhere.Plastic bags really bring us convenience,but they bring us great trouble as well,so we’d better not use them.If we have to,we can reuse them.As for street advertisements,I think we can make a team to wash them off once a week and encourage more people to do this,because the place we live in belongs to us,and we have the duty to make it cleaner.

That’s all,thank you!

高級(jí)（二）

One possible version:

Boys and girls,now I’ll talk about my future job.I have plenty of interests and I’m especially good at English and music.Also I’m outgoing.So I can get along wellwith my classmates and I like to communicate with others.I’m thinking about being a tour guide in the future,for there are more and more foreigners coming to visit Wuhan.I think I should study hard at school and read more English magazines.Only then will I have a chance of achieving my dream.Thank you!