孟天賀
隨著生活水平的提高和生活節(jié)奏的加快,相當(dāng)多的青少年忽視了鍛煉身體,結(jié)果越來(lái)越多的人體重超標(biāo),影響了正常的生活和學(xué)習(xí)。
請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿,介紹你的健身經(jīng)驗(yàn)。
提示:1. 每天早晨用15分鐘跑步,用30分鐘打籃球。
2. 每?jī)蓚€(gè)小時(shí)做一次眼保健操(do eye exercises)。
3. 每天晚飯后散步。
4. 每個(gè)周末用兩個(gè)小時(shí)做自己最喜愛(ài)的一項(xiàng)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。
要求:1. 文中要體現(xiàn)提示的全部?jī)?nèi)容。
2. 50詞左右。
3. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Hello, everyone. Im very glad to tell you something about sports and health.
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I hope you can take exercise every day and keep happy and healthy.
▲解題思路:
這是一篇介紹如何通過(guò)運(yùn)動(dòng)來(lái)保持身體健康的文章。首先,應(yīng)按照時(shí)間的順序來(lái)介紹你的具體做法。其次,在文章中可適當(dāng)使用often, usually等詞。最后,要把提示的全部?jī)?nèi)容體現(xiàn)在文章中。
參考句型及短語(yǔ):spend...doing sth; go for a walk; after dinner
▲學(xué)生習(xí)作:
Hello, everyone. Im very glad to tell you something about sports and health. Take exercise is one of the best ways to keep healthy. In the morning, I often run for 15 minutes and play basketball for 30 minutes. I do eye exercises every two hours. And I usually go for a walk after dinner. I usually do my favorite sport for two hours on weekends.
I hope you can take exercise every day and keep happy and healthy.
點(diǎn)評(píng):本文內(nèi)容完整、條理清楚、用詞準(zhǔn)確,是一篇成功的習(xí)作。只是有一處錯(cuò)誤須要改正:Take exercise 應(yīng)改為T(mén)aking exercise。在本句中,應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ),而不能用動(dòng)詞原形。
▲參考范文:
Hello, everyone. Im very glad to tell you something about sports and health. Taking exercise is one of the best ways to keep healthy. In the morning, I often run for 15 minutes and play basketball for 30 minutes. I do eye exercises every two hours. And I usually go for a walk after dinner. I usually do my favorite sport for two hours on weekends.
I hope you can take exercise every day and keep happy and healthy.