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2008-05-31 10:02:56張寶香
中學(xué)英語園地·教學(xué)指導(dǎo)版 2008年6期
張寶香
“You want to be teacher，do you？Dont be silly. Teachers are poorly paid. And they have no power to do what they wish to.” My friend was puzzled when I told her I wanted to be a teacher in the future. Im not silly and Ill tell him why.
Im determined to be a teacher because I have been admiring teachers very much since I was young. They are like angels，kind and respectable. They are learned，helpful and encouraging.
Im determined to be a teacher because teachers have the greatest power in the world. They lead us to success. They fan sparks of intelligence just as the God gave the breath of life into a clay figures nostrils.
Im determined to be a teacher because I can keep myself young for ever and I can learn，change and grow with my students.
Im determined to be a teacher because I like the living style of teachers，simple but free. The two vacations will offer me an opportunity for writing，doing research work and anything I like.
Ill try my best to be a qualified teacher. Firstly，Ill study hard to increase my knowledge and learn teaching skills. Secondly，Ill love my students and take pride in my profession. Thirdly，Ill trust them，respect them and understand them. I want to be their good friend and treat them equally.
I believe that teaching is the most honorable job in the world. Ill take it as my life-long career. I will never regret my decision. I think my wish will come true. Do you think so？
教師點評：
本文以附加疑問句開頭，突出了主題。文章層次清楚，用詞得當(dāng)，銜接緊湊，說服力強。這是一篇成功的習(xí)作。
(點評教師：石繼忠)
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Im determined to be a teacher because I can keep myself young for ever and I can learn，change and grow with my students.
Im determined to be a teacher because I like the living style of teachers，simple but free. The two vacations will offer me an opportunity for writing，doing research work and anything I like.
Ill try my best to be a qualified teacher. Firstly，Ill study hard to increase my knowledge and learn teaching skills. Secondly，Ill love my students and take pride in my profession. Thirdly，Ill trust them，respect them and understand them. I want to be their good friend and treat them equally.
I believe that teaching is the most honorable job in the world. Ill take it as my life-long career. I will never regret my decision. I think my wish will come true. Do you think so？
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本文以附加疑問句開頭，突出了主題。文章層次清楚，用詞得當(dāng)，銜接緊湊，說服力強。這是一篇成功的習(xí)作。
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