Winston Churchill once said，“Wemakea livingbywhatwe get，but we makea lifebywhat wegive.”Volunteeringisa contribution to the society.Last month，I took part ina community clean-up event.

Inthe event，the volunteersandI swept the street of my community first. Then，we cleaned up some windows outside in the community.In the end，we picked up the rubbish in the center park.

Afterthisevent，Iwastiredbutfullofasense ofaccomplishment.This experience taught me responsibility and the value of giving back.Small actions can make a big difference.I'll continue to volunteer and inspire others to join in creating a better world.

河南省鄭州市第八中學(xué)

指導(dǎo)老師劉改香

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習(xí)作開篇引用丘吉爾的名言引出志愿服務(wù)活動的重要性，第二段條理清晰地列舉了志愿服務(wù)活動的具體內(nèi)容，結(jié)尾段闡述了作者在志愿服務(wù)活動中的感受和收獲。主題積極而有意義，全文用詞簡練，表達流暢。