If God gives me a chance to choose my dream job， I want to be an English teacher teaching pupils. Here are two reasons.

For one thing，it will not only make me open-minded but also enable me to help pupils obtain knowledge.For another， I can make a difference to the development of the pupils by inspiring them to become better. I still remember failing an English exam once and feeling upset， my English teacher cheered me up and shared effective ways to improve my English. From then on， I made up my mind to be an English teacher.

In order to realize my dream， I'll spare no effort to study，read more English books and watch English movies so as to get more knowledge.I am firmly convinced that I will become an outstanding English teacher in the future.

河南省鄭州市金桂中學(xué)

指導(dǎo)老師 盧婷

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