廣東 何映樺

激活·素養(yǎng)解讀

__一級_______________________________________目標(biāo)語言能力二級目標(biāo)________________________________學(xué)會描述社會交往事件；運用動名詞作主語或賓語、定語從句和時間狀語從句____________象的問題并提出_________________________________________________________解決辦法，寫一封建議信。________________了解和諧的宿舍環(huán)境對學(xué)生成長的重要性和保持良好的宿舍人際關(guān)系的方掌握語篇段落之間以及段內(nèi)的邏輯關(guān)系；培養(yǎng)梳理概括、整合遷移信息的思維品質(zhì)，并能客觀地描述改善宿舍人際____________關(guān)系的措施，創(chuàng)造性地提出個______________________________________________人觀點，真切地給出建議。能夠從閱讀文本中提取寫作的素材，如內(nèi)容要點、主題詞塊和優(yōu)美句型____________建有效的寫作支架。1.2. ，闡述跨文化交際現(xiàn)文化意識______________________________________________________________________思維品質(zhì)法。1.2.學(xué)習(xí)能力，并搭

實踐·讀寫整合

How to be a good roommate

如何做一個好室友

1It can be a wonderful and satisfying experience to have roommates to share a home with.Living with others can often help you develop close relationships and learn some life skills along the way.But being a good roommate is about so much more than just keeping the room tidy.It means creating a peaceful living environment where respect and understanding are the underlying values.Here are five practical tips on how to be a good roommate.

2Firstly, any effective roommate relationship is built on respect. Just like in any other healthy relationship, roommates need to appreciate and respect one another's boundaries and personal space.

3Secondly, to resolve any concerns that may develop, effective communication is essential.Create an open-door policy where roommates can feel free to voice their worries,expectations,and feedback.

4Thirdly, nothing is more important than keeping your shared spaces clean and organized.Take the time to clean up after yourself and respect each other's standards of cleanliness.Keep communal areas like bathrooms and kitchens clean.

5Besides, cultivating a sense of humor can help diffuse tension caused by living with others and create a more relaxing atmosphere.A well-placed joke or a funny story can ease the stress and strengthen your bond with your roommates.

6Lastly, being considerate of your roommates' schedule, preferences, and routines is part of living with them.It is wise to be mindful of noise levels, especially when one of your roommates is studying or working or when anyone in the apartment is asleep.

7Self-awareness, sensitivity, and adaptability are ongoing processes that are all needed if you want to be a good roommate.When you make the choice to focus on how your behavior and approach affect the common living experience in your home,your relationship with your roommates might lead to lifelong friendships.

Activity A Reading for understanding

語篇解碼

（一）主題歸納

What is the text mainly about?

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（二）結(jié)構(gòu)分析與信息梳理

Fill in the blanks according to the text with only one word for each blank.

How to be a good roommate It can be a wonderful and 1. ________experience to have roommates to Why should we learn to be a good roommate?share a home with.Living with others can often help you develop close relationships and_________________________learn some life_skills along the way.

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Activity B Reading for writing

一、詞塊積累

underlying 潛在的；根本的

be built on 建立在……的基礎(chǔ)上

respect 尊重

boundary 邊界

resolve concerns 解決擔(dān)憂

essential必要的

voice one's worry 表達(dá)擔(dān)憂

cultivate 培養(yǎng)

diffuse tension 緩解緊張氣氛

atmosphere 氣氛

ease the stress 緩解壓力

strengthen one's bond with...加強(qiáng)與……的聯(lián)系

be considerate of 體貼；體諒

be mindful of 注意

adaptability 適應(yīng)性

二、典句賞析

（一）動名詞作主語或賓語

1. Living with others can often help you develop close relationships and learn some life skills along the way.與他人相處通常有助于你建立親密的人際關(guān)系，并在這個過程中學(xué)習(xí)一些生活技能。

【點石成金】本句中，主語是動名詞Living with others，這句話闡述了與他人相處對個人成長的影響。

2. It means creating a peaceful living environment where respect and understanding are the underlying values.(成為一個好室友)這意味著創(chuàng)造一個和平的生活環(huán)境，在這個環(huán)境中尊重和理解是根本價值觀。

【點石成金】該句的賓語是動名詞短語creating a peaceful living environment，闡述了“成為好室友”的內(nèi)涵，其后跟了關(guān)系副詞where 引導(dǎo)的定語從句，表明和諧環(huán)境的根本要求是尊重和理解。

【例句仿寫】眾所周知，創(chuàng)造一個和諧的宿舍環(huán)境對于學(xué)生生活是重要的。

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（二）定語從句

Create an open-door policy where roommates can feel free to voice their worries,expectations,and feedback.制定一項“開門政策”，讓室友們可以自由表達(dá)他們的擔(dān)憂、期望和反饋。

【點石成金】該句包含了由關(guān)系副詞where 引導(dǎo)的定語從句，其先行詞為an opendoor policy，定語從句補(bǔ)充的細(xì)節(jié)使“開門政策”這一抽象概念更加清晰和具體。

【例句仿寫】建立和諧融洽的居住環(huán)境，在這個環(huán)境下個人空間得到尊重。

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（三）時間狀語從句

It is wise to be mindful of noise levels, especially when one of your roommates is studying or working or when anyone in the apartment is asleep.注意噪聲大小乃明智之舉，尤其是當(dāng)室友在學(xué)習(xí)或工作時，或者是公寓里有人睡著時。

【點石成金】該句的結(jié)構(gòu)為“it isadj.to do sth”，表示“做某事怎樣”，后跟when引導(dǎo)的狀語從句，闡述了在學(xué)習(xí)、工作或有人睡覺的情況下注意噪聲大小的重要性。

【例句仿寫】當(dāng)矛盾發(fā)生時，你應(yīng)該冷靜下來，并與室友溝通。

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三、寫作遷移

假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Andrew 不久前出國留學(xué)，他來信說在與室友相處時遇到了問題，特向你請教如何與室友相處。請你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容如下：

1.表達(dá)理解和關(guān)心；

2.相處的具體建議；

3.表達(dá)個人期待。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.至少需要使用一個本文中解析過的句式；

4.注意段落內(nèi)的邏輯關(guān)系。

參考詞匯：harmonious 和諧的 dormitory 寢室

Dear Andrew,

I'm sorry to know that you have some trouble getting along well with your roommates._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li HuaYours,

寫作導(dǎo)引

?激活思維

本次寫作任務(wù)是寫一封建議信。在信中，李華需要為筆友提供關(guān)于與室友相處的建議，描述營造和諧的宿舍氛圍的重要性，分析與闡述和室友相處時出現(xiàn)的問題，并給出具體建議。題目要求使用動名詞作主語或賓語、定語從句或時間狀語從句。這些寫作要求與所給語篇的主題語境是緊密相關(guān)的。我們可以通過整合同一主題的閱讀材料的內(nèi)容和語言，梳理寫作思路和積累素材。

?素材積累

本次寫作任務(wù)是基于同一主題的語篇閱讀的寫作，我們可以通過學(xué)習(xí)、模仿并運用閱讀中的語言表達(dá)，如詞塊和句型，積累寫作的語言素材。

（一）表達(dá)理解和關(guān)心，表明寫信目的

1. I am sorry to know that you have trouble getting along with your roommates.Creating a harmonious dormitory life is essential, and I am here to offer you some suggestions.我很抱歉得知你和室友相處不好。營造和諧的宿舍生活是至關(guān)重要的，我在此向你提出一些建議。

2. I completely understand how challenging it is to adjust to living with others in a foreign country. Getting along well with others is significant to campus life, and I'm writing to give some advice.我完全理解適應(yīng)在異國他鄉(xiāng)與他人一起生活是多么具有挑戰(zhàn)性。與他人和睦相處對校園生活意義重大，我想給你提供一些建議。

3. I can imagine how anxious you feel to get along well with your roommates. Indeed,it is vital to have a good relationship with your roommates,and I'm here to help you make it work.我能想象你為了和室友和睦相處而感到多么焦慮。事實上，和室友保持良好的關(guān)系至關(guān)重要，而我就是來幫你做到這一點的。

（二）根據(jù)宿舍相處問題提出具體建議

1. Initially, effective communication based on respect is key especially when differences occur.首先，基于尊重的有效溝通是關(guān)鍵，尤其是在出現(xiàn)分歧時。

2. An effective way to resolve conflicts is to be open-minded and receptive to your roommates'opinion.解決沖突的有效方法是保持開明、樂于接受室友的意見。

3. Secondly, it is crucial to appreciate and respect personal space and boundaries,which will contribute to building a more peaceful and comfortable living environment. 其次，重視和尊重個人空間和界限至關(guān)重要，這將有助于創(chuàng)造一個更加和平、舒適的生活環(huán)境。

4. Thirdly, nothing is more vital than sharing responsibilities of keeping your dormitory clean and organized.第三，沒有什么比共同分擔(dān)保持宿舍整潔有序的責(zé)任更重要了。

5.Work together to establish routines and guidelines that suit both of your needs.共同制定適合雙方的常規(guī)和指南。

6.Lastly,be patient and considerate,because strengthening your bond with your roommates takes time and effort from both sides.最后，要耐心和體貼，因為加強(qiáng)與室友的聯(lián)系需要雙方付出時間和努力。

（三）表達(dá)美好祝愿

1.I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you.希望我的建議能對你有所幫助。

2. I sincerely hope that my advice will be useful to you. 我衷心希望我的建議對你有用。

3.I hope what is mentioned above will help you foster a harmonious atmosphere in the dormitory.希望上述內(nèi)容能幫助你營造和諧的宿舍氛圍。

4.With patience and a willingness to communicate,I believe you can have a good relationship with your roommates.只要有耐心并愿意溝通，我相信你能與室友建立良好的關(guān)系。

5.Please feel free to reach out to me if you need any further assistance.如果你需要更多幫助，請隨時聯(lián)系我。

?寫作支架

本次寫作任務(wù)是寫一封建議信，根據(jù)任務(wù)中的要求，語篇結(jié)構(gòu)可定為“表達(dá)理解和關(guān)心+闡述措施+個人見解+表達(dá)祝愿”。文章的框架如下：

Dear Andrew,

I am sorry to know that you have some trouble getting along well with your roommates.Creating a harmonious dormitory life is essential,and I'm writing to...（表達(dá)理解和關(guān)心）

Initially, effective communication based on respect is...especially when... Secondly, it is crucial to..., which contributes to... Lastly, remember to... because...（闡述措施+個人見解）

I sincerely hope that my advice will be...Please feel free to...if you...（表達(dá)祝愿）

Li Hua

?語篇過手

根據(jù)以上提供的主題、詞塊、句型和語篇結(jié)構(gòu)，寫一封建議信。第一段表示理解和關(guān)心，表明寫信目的；第二段闡述與室友和諧相處的具體措施，表達(dá)個人見解；第三段表達(dá)美好祝愿。總詞數(shù)控制在80左右。

同時，學(xué)習(xí)運用前文閱讀中出現(xiàn)的動名詞作主語或賓語、定語從句或時間狀語從句等高級表達(dá)和句子結(jié)構(gòu)。尤其要注意文章的邏輯性和條理性，以及語言的準(zhǔn)確性、流暢性和得體性。