介紹地點(diǎn)的說(shuō)明文,要求圍繞某一個(gè)地點(diǎn)進(jìn)行介紹,它以說(shuō)明為主,中間可以穿插描寫(xiě)和敘述。對(duì)此,筆者就這類(lèi)說(shuō)明文的寫(xiě)作技巧和常用句型進(jìn)行了歸納,以期對(duì)同學(xué)們的寫(xiě)作有所助益。
【寫(xiě)作技巧】
(1)明確主體內(nèi)容。此類(lèi)說(shuō)明文,通常是先介紹該地點(diǎn)的總體情況,如地理位置、 交通、氣候、歷史背景等,然后具體介紹當(dāng)?shù)?的名勝古跡、歷史文化以及美食特色等;最 后,進(jìn)行總結(jié)。
(2)抓住主要特征。每個(gè)事物都有其獨(dú) 特之處,在介紹該地點(diǎn)時(shí),要抓住地點(diǎn)的主 要特征展開(kāi)說(shuō)明,以便于讀者對(duì)該地點(diǎn)產(chǎn)生 清晰的認(rèn)識(shí)和了解,從而留下深刻的印象。
(3)運(yùn)用合理的說(shuō)明順序。介紹地點(diǎn) 時(shí),不要想到哪里就寫(xiě)到哪里,要按照一定 的說(shuō)明順序進(jìn)行描述,如自上而下,從左到 右,由遠(yuǎn)到近等,從而避免文章顯得雜亂無(wú) 章,使文章讀來(lái)富有邏輯性和層次感。
【常用句型】
(1)It is an old city with a long history.
它是一座歷史悠久的古城。
(2)It lies in/is located in/is situated in…
它位于……
(3)It is surrounded by mountains and seas,has picturesque scenery,rich cultural re- sources.
它依山傍水,風(fēng)景如畫(huà),文化資源豐富。
(4)It has convenient transportation, conve- nient shopping, and comfortable environment.
它交通便利,購(gòu)物方便,環(huán)境舒適。
(5)It is famous for...,attracting many vis- itors from all over the world.
它以……而聞名,吸引了來(lái)自世界各地的許多游客。
(6)There are many places of interest, such as ..
這里有許多名勝古跡,比如,……
(7)You can enjoy the beautiful natural scenery, taste the delicious local food and ex- perience the unique culture.
您可以欣賞美麗的自然風(fēng)光,品嘗當(dāng)?shù)孛朗常w驗(yàn)獨(dú)特的文化。
(8)The friendly and hospitable locals will make you feel at home.
友好熱情的當(dāng)?shù)厝藭?huì)讓你有賓至如歸的感覺(jué)。
(9)I sincerely invite/welcome you to vis- it…
我真誠(chéng)地邀請(qǐng)/歡迎您來(lái)參觀……
【真題展示】
(2023年江蘇連云港中考卷)走進(jìn)江蘇,游歷各地。眾多外國(guó)友人暑期將參加“GoJi—angsu”旅游活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖片及文字提示,以“welcome to Li- anyungang”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,邀請(qǐng)他們走進(jìn)家鄉(xiāng)連云港,品山海文化,游大圣故里。
分析:通過(guò)審題,不難看出該書(shū)面表達(dá) 是一篇介紹江蘇連云港的說(shuō)明文,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括:(1)介紹連云 港的地理位置、氣候以及風(fēng)景名勝;(2)介紹 連云港豐富的歷史文化、當(dāng)?shù)氐娜藗兓蛎?食;(3)邀請(qǐng)客人前來(lái)游覽和體驗(yàn)。
【參考范文】
Welcome to Lianyungang
I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you.
Lianyungang is located in the north- east of Jiangsu. The city is surrounded by mountains and seas. Summer here is cool, making it a perfect time for travel sightseeing. There are many places of interest, such as Huaguo Mountain,Yuntai Mountain and Yuanwutai Beach.The most famous place is Huaguo Mountain,which is the legendary home of the Monkey King Sun Wukong in Journey to the West.Here you can enjoy picturesque scenery and see a lot of cute monkeys.
Lianyungang has a long history and rich cultural heritage.You can experience the charm of traditional folk customs by visiting Donghai ancient city,Kuaijin ancient village and a lot of well-preserved ancient temples.
In Lianyungang,you can also taste deli-cious seafood,Huaiyang cuisine and various snacks like fired shrimp,fish ball and dry-cured goose.The friendly and hospitable lo-cals will make you feel at home.
I sincerely invite you to come my home-town,Lianyungang!I’m sure you will have an unforgettable summer here.