安徽 姜仲華

★話題概述

就近幾年中考英語試題來看，涉及休閑與娛樂話題的作文越來越多。

休閑與娛樂話題一般包括休閑活動(dòng)、休閑場所、文娛活動(dòng)、娛樂項(xiàng)目、文藝賽事、音樂、舞蹈、演出、游戲、電影、電視、研學(xué)旅游、藝術(shù)解讀等等。

在寫作中，我們不僅可以描述休閑與娛樂的益處，記錄休閑與娛樂的活動(dòng)過程，還可以就休閑與娛樂有關(guān)的內(nèi)容作簡要的說明并談?wù)勛约旱母惺艿取?/p>

★高頻詞語

A.休閑娛樂活動(dòng)

①chat聊天

②walk散步

③listen to music聽音樂

④watch TV看電視

⑤leisure activities休閑活動(dòng)

⑥sing and dance唱歌跳舞

⑦play games做游戲

⑧study trip研學(xué)旅游

⑨go hiking遠(yuǎn)足

⑩play basketball打籃球

B.有關(guān)休閑娛樂的固定搭配

①be good for health對(duì)健康有好處

②a healthy lifestyle一種健康的生活方式

③keep fit保持健康

④maintain a good mood保持良好的心情

⑤make sb.healthy使某人健康

★提分句型

①Leisure activities，such as...，are good for our health.休閑活動(dòng)，諸如……，對(duì)我們的健康有好處。

②Many people work every day without enough relaxation.人們每天工作且得不到足夠的放松。

③It is the unhealthy lifestyle that I do not recommend.我不推薦這種不健康的生活方式。

④I believe that people should try to keep a balance between work and leisure.我認(rèn)為人們應(yīng)該要努力維持工作和休閑的平衡。

⑤We should not do...Instead，we have to do...我們不應(yīng)該做……。相反，我們得去做……。

⑥Leisure activities can help us keep fit.休閑活動(dòng)能幫助我們保持身體健康。

⑦We can focus on our studies.我們能集中精力學(xué)習(xí)。

⑧I believe that we should have more andmoreleisureactivities tomakeushealthy.我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該要有更多的休閑活動(dòng)來使得我們變得健康。

★話題模板

★佳作賞評(píng)

Leisure activities

Leisureactivities，suchaswatching television，listening to music and traveling，are good for our health.

Nowadays，many people work every day without enough relaxation and leisure activities.It is the unhealthy lifestyle that I do not recommend.I believe that people should do more activities and try to keep a balance between work and leisure.We，as students，should not sit at our desks and do homework all the time.Instead，we have to find some time for leisure activities such as walking and chatting with our friends.We can also play basketball，football，or pingpong with our friends.These sports and leisure activities can help us keep fit and maintain a good mood.Then we can focus on our studies.

All in all，I believe that we should have more and more leisure activities to make us healthy.

【權(quán)威點(diǎn)評(píng)】

這是一篇說明文。文章指出休閑活動(dòng)對(duì)身體健康的好處，也相信人們會(huì)越來越關(guān)注休閑活動(dòng)，以保持身體的健康。

全文中心突出，層次分明，語言精練，條理清晰。作者對(duì)話題的積極意義表述恰當(dāng)，所介紹的休閑方法有可操作性。總之，這是一篇優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生作文。

【思路解析】

首先，用列舉法說明什么是休閑活動(dòng)，并指出了休閑活動(dòng)的重要性；然后，從反面介紹許多人一味地學(xué)習(xí)和工作，忽略了休閑活動(dòng)，從而對(duì)身心健康帶來不良的影響，并就此提出了一些可促使改善不良影響的休閑活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目；最后，呼吁人們維持工作與休閑的平衡，保持身心健康。

★典題例解

請你根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.你參與過或看過的一次歌唱比賽，以及你當(dāng)時(shí)的感受。

2.同學(xué)們對(duì)參加歌唱比賽利弊的看法。

3.如有機(jī)會(huì)參加歌唱比賽，你會(huì)參加嗎？

【寫作提示】

1.審題立意

本文是一篇要求寫一次參與過或看過的歌唱比賽的經(jīng)歷和感受的記敘文。行文時(shí)，要通過比賽經(jīng)歷、參賽的感悟（或看賽的經(jīng)歷和感悟）及同學(xué)們對(duì)這種娛樂活動(dòng)的評(píng)價(jià)來表明自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)。

2.布局謀篇

文章開頭應(yīng)要介紹曾經(jīng)參與或目睹的歌唱比賽，可以用“It is my honor to...”等句型來表明自己有幸參與過或目睹過該活動(dòng)。接下來，交代參賽選手的狀況或與自己的（經(jīng)歷）作對(duì)比。比賽過程要敘述清楚，可夾敘夾議，以突出心理感受，然后指出比賽的結(jié)果和同學(xué)們的看法。最后，進(jìn)一步表明自己對(duì)歌唱這種娛樂活動(dòng)的看法和態(tài)度。

3.詞句表達(dá)

◆詞語

①take part in/compete in a singing contest參加歌唱比賽

②competitor參賽者；競爭者

③nervous緊張的

④try one's best to do竭力做某事

⑤calm down（使）平靜

⑥improve one's self-confidence增強(qiáng)某人的自信

⑦waste time浪費(fèi)時(shí)間

◆句型

①It is an honor that I had a chance...很榮幸有……機(jī)會(huì)。

②I was the first/last one to do sth.我第一個(gè)/最后一個(gè)做某事。

③I was waiting for my turn to do sth.我等著輪到我做某事。

④I won the first/second...prize in the contest.我獲得了比賽的第一名/第二名/……。

⑤It is good for...to improve...skill.這有利于……提高……技能。

4.語法建議

本文是寫自己曾經(jīng)參與或所見的一次歌唱比賽的經(jīng)歷，因此時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)為主。由于行文是作者自述，所以使用第一人稱比較合適。

【參考范文】

It was a great honor that I had a chance to take part in a singing contest in our schoollast week.

There were ten competitors in our contest and I was the last one to sing.I was very nervous when I was waiting for my turn to sing because the other competitors all sang well.However，I tried my best to calm down myself.Finally，I won the second prize in the singing contest.Some of my classmates thought that the singing contest could improveourself-confidencewhileothers thought that it wasted our study time.

If I have an opportunity to join in a television singing contest，I will take it because it is good for me to improve my singing skill.

★即時(shí)練筆

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Dear Li Lei，

I haven't heard from you for a long time.I'm glad to tell you that I'll visit Beijing this summer vacation.It is said that Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 Olympic Games.I would like to know something about Beijing，such as some places of interest，the environment，traffic and people there.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours，

Tommy