江蘇省揚(yáng)州市江都區(qū)大橋中心小學(xué) 王恬歆 批閱:Lois Hill
指導(dǎo)老師:倪 茜 整理:李 娟
評(píng)語(yǔ)
Glad to hear about your library experience!Pay attention to the corrections here, in particular to the word order.
很開(kāi)心聽(tīng)到你在圖書(shū)館的經(jīng)歷!注意文中修改的部分,特別是單詞排列順序的問(wèn)題。