安徽省合肥市第四十六中學(xué) 九年級(jí)（16）班 宋 楊

When I was a 6 year-old boy，I began to study in a primary school next to our community.Two years later，I was 8 and I was in Grade 3.English classes were opened in our grade at that time.At first，I had no interest in studying English，so I often failed my English exams，and our English teacher was disappointed with me.

One day，my English teacher told me that she thought I had the inborn ability of studying English well and I was just lazy！After this embarrassing conversation.I began to work very hard and my interest in studying English increased a lot because I didn’t want to disappoint my English teacher’s expectation.In the final examination of Grade 3，I got the highest score in our class.

When I become a middle school student，another trouble appeared.I couldn’t remember the grammar very well，so I recited it again and again...Day by day my English level becomes higher and higher.As time goes on，my vocabulary is growing bigger and bigger.In other people’s mind.I am a lively boy now，but they don’t know I always wanted to complain about something in the past∶why fate was so unfair to me？ Why？ Until that day...On that day，I watched a varied show.The honored guest said that complaint is of no use，do it yourself！ I thought I got it！ I am a lively boy now！ The words that the teacher and the honored guest said opened the window of my heart.There is an old saying∶“Teachers open the door，but you must enter by yourself！”

So in my opinion，teachers’encouragement，your effort and sweat are the best tools and help！

教師點(diǎn)評(píng)：

這不是應(yīng)試作文，而是一篇關(guān)于作者學(xué)習(xí)英語經(jīng)歷的心態(tài)變化和最后終有所悟的日常習(xí)作。

本文條理清晰，主題突出，文風(fēng)樸實(shí)，行文流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確，基本無語法錯(cuò)誤。作者的感悟也富有啟發(fā)意義，是一篇值得中學(xué)生借鑒的優(yōu)秀之作。