To get great grades in English， we must be a successful English learner first. Thus， my advice on how we can learn English well is as follows.

As the saying goes， “Interest is the best teacher”. So it’s of great help for us to study English by connecting our hobbies. For example， if you are a big fan of music， listening to English songs is a great choice. It’s also a nice way to open our mind to other cultures. In addition， taking notes and listening to teacher carefully in class are important， too. And the notes should be learned by heart after the class. Last but not least， we should be brave enough to face the difficulties.

However， it is easier said than done. So， make a plan for learning English and start taking action now！

河南省鄭州市第七十六中學

指導(dǎo)老師 張偉華

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這篇作文從如何成為一名好的英語學習者的角度闡述了學好英語的方法。詞匯運用靈活，用“be of great help”代替常用單詞“helpful” ，還恰當?shù)厥褂昧酥V語。最后一段使用非常具有號召力的語言，號召同學們做計劃并立刻行動起來。