范玙瑄

Hello， everyone！ Im Lucy. Im your friend. Let me tell you about my English learning.

Four years ago，I began to learn English. We have learned a lot words and sentences， and I can use them in and out of class. My English teacher is a young teacher， but she is a wise teacher. I like my English teacher very much！ Because she taught us in many ways. In English lessons， I listened to my English teacher carefully. Out of English lesson， we often sang， danced， chanted and played games. Our English teacher usually let us do things by ourselves. We did role play. We acted in drama. Now I can use words and sentences to tell stories.

In English lessons， Im very happy！ From English lessons and English teacher， I know learning English is a very happy thing.

簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：

該篇習(xí)作結(jié)構(gòu)完整，有條理，細(xì)節(jié)充實(shí)，語(yǔ)句通順流暢，語(yǔ)言邏輯清晰。小作者將英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)間、學(xué)習(xí)方法以及學(xué)習(xí)成果描述得很清楚。

指導(dǎo)教師：王雪娟