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Our school holds an English Week on the second week of September every year. During the week， all the teachers and students from every grade will come to the playground and join in the rich and colorful activities. We can enjoy watching English play. We can also go to the English Book Fair or join an English Treasure Hunt. The most exciting part in the week is the English speaking competition. Students should speak on a topic in English for three minutes.

In my opinion， English Week is a big chance to improve our English. We can learn new words， and have a good time at the same time. Im looking forward to the next English Week.

傅紅老師點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文開門見山，直入主題。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、要點(diǎn)齊全、表達(dá)流利、過渡自然。一些亮點(diǎn)詞句的使用，如：The most exciting part in the week is...，in my opinion， at the same time，look forward to等，提升了文章的語言檔次。

“英語周”活動(dòng)既是校園文化一角，更是孩子們學(xué)習(xí)英語、實(shí)踐英語、展示英語的多彩平臺(tái)。本篇作文的作文試題是要求根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容提示介紹英語周的一些情況，考生應(yīng)重點(diǎn)關(guān)注三點(diǎn)：一是要點(diǎn)全，二是時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)，三是連接詞的恰當(dāng)使用。

佳句欣賞：

1. The most exciting part in the week is the English speaking competition.

2. Students should speak on a topic in English for three minutes.

3. We can learn new words， and have a good time at the same time.

4. Im looking forward to the next English Week.

范文：

There is an English Week in our school every year. It is the second week of September. The English Week lasts five days. All the students and teachers can take part in it on the playground. There are many activities during English Week. Some students can take part in the English speech competition. And we can also put on English plays. Of course， some students can buy their favorite books in the English Book Fair. Our teachers often sing their favorite English songs. English Week is very interesting， and it can make us more interested in English.