張馨媛
Mrs. Lan is my favorite teacher. She is of medium height. And she is thin. She has long black straight hair. She teaches us Chinese. We are interested in her lessons. Because she is good at different kinds of knowledge. She is strict in our study. But she is friendly to us. We all like her.
【簡評】這篇習(xí)作以一個學(xué)生的眼光觀察老師的特點,包含了外貌描寫和性格描寫兩個方面,實踐應(yīng)用了七年級下冊第八單元的重點知識點,字里行間表達出對老師的深厚感情。
指導(dǎo)教師:那莎
編輯/丁俊玲