李惠澤

要求：你有位朋友，名叫張和平，13歲。他的電話號碼是：463-8943，在第十中學(xué)。他的房間很整潔，書放在書包里，字典放在桌子上，3個棒球放在桌子下面。他是一名好學(xué)生等。

請根據(jù)以上所給信息，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以“My good friend”為題寫一篇文章。

My good friend is Zhang Heping. He is 13 years old. His phone number is 463-8943. He is in No.10 Middle School. His room is very tidy and clean. The books are in his schoolbag. The dictionary is on the desk. There are three baseballs under the desk. He likes sports. He can play soccer， basketball， baseball， ping-pong ball and so on. He is a good student， too. He studies very hard. I should learn from him. I hope we can be friends for ever.

【簡評】這篇習(xí)作從內(nèi)容上說要點(diǎn)齊全，符合題目要求，并作了適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;從語言運(yùn)用上看，所用結(jié)構(gòu)雖然簡單，但文章意思表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，準(zhǔn)確無誤。是一篇成功的習(xí)作。

指導(dǎo)教師：齊紅娟

My Good Friend 陳子昂

I have a good friend. His name is Zhang Heping. He is 13 years old. His phone number is 463-8943. He is in No.10 Middle School. He is a good student. He studies hard and he is tidy. In his room， his books are in the schoolbag. The dictionary is on the desk. Three baseballs are under the desk. A basketball is under the desk， too. After school， he always plays soccer with me. He likes soccer， but he doesnt like volleyball. Maybe its difficult for him. He often plays basketball with me， too. I really like him.

【簡評】本文緊扣主題，思路清晰，語言流暢。分別從個人基本信息、學(xué)習(xí)、整潔、愛好幾個方面介紹了“我的好朋友——張和平”。是一篇較好的中學(xué)生習(xí)作。

指導(dǎo)教師：齊紅娟

編輯/丁俊玲