鄭敏

I am growing and Im taller than before. In my life, I hope to grow up happily and healthy. So there are a lot of things that I need to do. First, my life is not always full of sunshine. My parents and teachers always require me to have a good grade. I also hope so. I keep on working hard, I also want to play and relax. Sometimes I argue with my parents and its terrible. Second, when Im in trouble, I should be brave enough to deal with problems. Meeting different problems, Ill regard them as challenges. Ill try to solve them with my heart. After all, Im too young. I have many opportunities to do some things. Its a good chance to do something important. Im growing happily.

簡評：本文真實描述了小作者自己現(xiàn)在的生活，句子連貫通順，句式豐富，言辭誠懇。有效地使用了First, second, sometimes等連接詞，井然有序地描述了自己的生活。

作者能夠按照題目的要求，生動、詳細地刻畫自己目前的生活，條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，內(nèi)容充實。同時也提示我們要恰當?shù)靥幚砗门c父母之間的摩擦和沖突。

（指導(dǎo)教師：李池紅）