黃浩

【情景導(dǎo)入】

炎熱的暑假又到了，你經(jīng)常到游泳池去游泳嗎？那么游泳時(shí)千萬要注意安全！當(dāng)然，在平時(shí)的日常生活中也要注意安全。保護(hù)好自己?jiǎn)眩?/p>

【作文要求】

2013年5月11日（星期六）上午，廣東省惠州市博羅縣羅陽一中8名初二學(xué)生在東江邊燒烤時(shí)，1名學(xué)生不慎落水，4名同學(xué)施救，造成5名學(xué)生溺亡。這個(gè)悲劇是慘重的。為了更好地宣傳安全的重要性，學(xué)校打算擬一份安全生活的倡議書。根據(jù)安全的主題，請(qǐng)結(jié)合提示詞，再增加一兩個(gè)你的觀點(diǎn)，以How to keep safe為題寫一篇100詞左右的倡議書。

提示詞：ride in the middle of the road， fight， swim alone， play with electricity， go upstairs.

How to keep safe

Boys and girls，

As we all know， 5 students lost their lives in the swimming accident on May 11th， 2013 in Guangdong.

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【寫作指導(dǎo)】

（一）審題

本篇作文為倡議書，著重介紹安全的重要性。為了保證安全，在生活和學(xué)習(xí)中，哪些事情是可以做的，哪些事情是禁止做的。本文可采用夾敘夾議的手法，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

（二）列舉寫作要點(diǎn)

1. 描述溺水事故及原因；

2. 就安全問題給出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議；

3. 給出一些警示。

（三）列出重點(diǎn)短語和句型

keep safe， in the middle of……， after school， in my opinion， be allowed to do sth.

【佳作欣賞】 How to keep safe

Boys and girls，

As we all know， 5 students lost their lives in the swimming accident on May 11th， 2013 in Guangdong.

Why did the sad event happen？ I think some students learn little about how to keep safe. Here are some suggestions for us to follow： Dont ride in the middle of the road. That can cause some traffic accidents. Dont fight at school or swim alone after school. That may bring some injuries or deaths. Dont play with electricity or go upstairs. Thats dangerous. In my opinion， students should also keep away from harmful foods or junk foods. At the same time， they shouldnt be allowed to go online or be in a web bar. That will be bad for their study and health.

（作者單位：安徽省懷遠(yuǎn)縣馬城鎮(zhèn)禹廟中學(xué)）