“看圖作文”題要求考生根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容、所給的關(guān)鍵詞、所提供的題材寫出一篇語法正確、意思連貫、符合邏輯的英語短文。下面談?wù)劇翱磮D作文”題的解題步驟與思路:
1. 審清題意
考生在動筆之前要認(rèn)真閱讀命題人提出的要求,明確作文的中心思想,確定重點內(nèi)容。它可以是記敘文,也可以是說明文??忌鷳?yīng)先根據(jù)圖畫和試題的要求來確定文體。
2. 觀察圖畫,發(fā)揮想象,構(gòu)思文章
看懂圖是寫好短文的前提。看懂圖,可以幫助確定文體、人稱和時態(tài)。如果是一篇日記或故事,宜采用一般過去時;如果是人或事的簡介,宜采用一般現(xiàn)在時??忌诳磮D時要觀察人物及人物的動作、行為、表情及他們之間的關(guān)系。此外,還要確定物品及物品的形態(tài)、位置、大小以及事件的背景等??忌\用想象力,對圖畫內(nèi)容進(jìn)行必要的發(fā)揮和延伸。之后要認(rèn)真研讀英文提示詞語,以免遺漏其中的“要點”。
3. 找重點,列提綱,逐圖描述
寫作前,考生應(yīng)先在草稿紙上列一個提綱。這樣做,就能使寫作思路清晰,避免涂改,節(jié)省時間。列提綱時,要求結(jié)合圖示,選定單詞、詞組、句式;要求盡量揚長避短,避難就易;還要求選用符合英文表達(dá)習(xí)慣的句式,充分利用提示詞語。逐圖描述時,圖文意思要一致,語言文字要連貫,語法要正確無誤。
下面是(2008年湖北咸寧市的中考“看圖作文”。
“地震無情,人有情”,大災(zāi)過后,災(zāi)區(qū)的小朋友們卻度過了一個自己終生難忘的“六一”兒童節(jié)!
請你仔細(xì)觀察下面的三幅圖,根據(jù)圖示內(nèi)容,以“A Special Children’s Day”為題,寫一篇短文。
提示詞語:from disaster areas(災(zāi)區(qū)),unforgettable(難忘的)
【思路點撥】 (1) 審題:看懂圖畫的基本含義:著名歌唱家和災(zāi)區(qū)的孩子們共度“六一”,災(zāi)區(qū)的孩子們度過了一個難忘的節(jié)日。 (2) 確定下列要點:① 著名歌唱家和孩子們一起過節(jié) ② 與災(zāi)區(qū)孩子們共度“六一” ③ 歌唱家送給孩子們禮物。 (3) 確定時態(tài):用一般過去時。
【參考范文】
A Special Children’s Day
Children’s Day is a great day for the children from disaster areas! They had an unforgettable Children’s Day this year! People all over the country were caring about them.
There were many special concerts held for them. In the concerts,they could sing with the famous singers like Liu Dehua. Some of them were invited to enjoy the day with other children from big cities. They sang,danced and played games together. The singers gave children many gifts such as books,dolls,and backpacks.
I believe it was the happiest Children’s Day they had spent so far! How lucky they were!
【練一練】
1. 請你就以下五幅圖寫一篇短文,描述你昨天乘公交車去看電影途中的經(jīng)歷,向?qū)W校墻報投稿。詞數(shù)80個左右。
2. 根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容及英語提示詞寫一篇80個詞左右的短文。開頭句子已經(jīng)給出,但是不計入總詞數(shù)。
提示詞語:Zhang Hong,Han Mei,much help
Granny Wang is over seventy. She has no children,but she often gets much help from others. ...
【參考范文】
1. Yesterday I wanted to see a film,so I took a bus to the cinema. I was sitting in the bus when I saw an old lady getting on. I stood up at once and offered my seat to her. The old lady sat down happily and thanked me. When the bus stopped in front of the cinema,I got off and waved goodbye to her.
2. Granny Wang is over seventy. She has no children,but she often gets much help from others.
Zhang Hong and Han Mei are classmates. Both of them are Young Pioneers. On Sundays,they often help Granny Wang do some housework. Yesterday morning,they did some washing at Granny’s house and they went out to buy some rice,vegetables and fruit for her. Then they took Granny Wang to the park to watch the flower show. They had a good time together.
Granny Wang enjoys a happy life in her late year.
中學(xué)英語園地·教學(xué)指導(dǎo)版2009年2期