張　東

原文：

Food

I like bananas. For breakfast, I like bananas, eggs and milks1. I like any2 rice, vegetables and bananas. For dinner, I also like bananas and hamburgers. And3 my young sister dont4 like them. She like5 meat, so she is very fat.

分析：本文條理清晰、意思連貫地介紹了自己一日三餐的飲食習(xí)慣，而且還特別指出“香蕉”是自己的最愛，有重點，但也有幾處錯誤：

1. milk為不可數(shù)名詞，不能在其后加s。

2. any用于疑問句、否定句中，如I dont have any books, 而some用于肯定句或表請求的疑問句中，如Could you give me some rice?

3. 根據(jù)后面對like 的否定，得知此句與上句的意思不同，應(yīng)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折的連詞but而不用表示并列的連詞and。

4. 要否定實義動詞like,則需借助dont或doesnt, my young sister為第三人稱單數(shù)，所以應(yīng)該用doesnt。

5. 主語she為第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語動詞也需用第三人稱單數(shù)形式，即likes。

改正：

Food

I like bananas. For breakfast, I like bananas, eggs and milk. I like some rice, vegetables and bananas. For dinner, I also like bananas and hamburgers. But my young sister doesnt like them. She likes meat, so she is very fat.

(指導(dǎo)教師：鄭一敏)