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Im Gina. I like go1 to a movie on weekends, and I also like basketball. My favorite is play2 piano3 for the reason that it is very graceful(優(yōu)美). Now Im in the piano club. There are many classmates there. We learn it from each other. Sometimes they teach I4. Sometimes I teach them. We learn it happily. Please soon join us5.
評語:本篇通過介紹自己的愛好——彈鋼琴,號召其他同學都加入鋼琴俱樂部,文章條理清晰,語言簡潔。
1. like doing sth.表示習慣性的喜愛做某事,即go應改為going。
2. be后接賓語play要用動名詞也就是v-ing形式,即playing。
3. 若指打球,則play后直接加球類名詞,為固定搭配,但是表示彈奏樂器,play后要加定冠詞the再加樂器名。例如:play the guitar。
4. teach是實義動詞,在句中作謂語成份,其后接賓語,人稱代詞要用其相應的賓格形式,即me。
5. “趕快加入吧”, join us soon, soon 不久的將來,在此作時間狀語,位于句尾。
My Hobby
Im Gina. I like going to a movie on weekends and I also like basketball. My favorite is playing the piano for the reason that its very graceful. Now Im in the piano club. There are many classmates there. We learn it from each other. Sometimes they teach me. Sometimes I teach them. We learn it happily. Please join us soon.
指導老師:張云昊