As the saying goes，“When you give roses， their fragrance lingers on your hand.\"Volunteering isimportantforteenagerstoachievetheirdreams and growasindividuals.

Myclassorganizedavolunteeractivitylast year.Itwasmy first time being a volunteer，so I wasso excited. We got up early and gathered in thePorridge Housewhere weplannedto serve breakfasttothestreetcleaners.We firstvisited the houseunder the guidance of our teacher. Then we were divided into groups to finish different tasks.

Mygroup poured theporridge into a bigbucketand moved itoutside.Bythen thecleanersoutsidewere alreadywaitingfortheirmeals.We served them porridgeand steamed bread inan orderly manner. Seeing the grateful smiles on their faceswhile working，Ifeltdeeplysatisfied.

Thisexperience helpedmeunderstand that helping others isone of the best ways to feel happy and fulfilled. Itwas truly unforgettable！

指導(dǎo)老師 劉改香

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文章開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)明志愿服務(wù)活動(dòng)對(duì)青少年成長(zhǎng)的價(jià)值和意義，主體部分能夠用“got up“gathered”“planned”“visited”“were divided”“poured”“moved”“waiting”“served”“seeing”“felt”等系列動(dòng)詞詳細(xì)記錄本次愛(ài)心粥屋送粥活動(dòng)的經(jīng)過(guò)，充分體現(xiàn)了作者對(duì)生活的細(xì)致觀察以及扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底。