Time flies like an arrow， and time lost never returns. In the past few years of my junior high school life， what impressed me most was running.

At first， I didn’t like sports. I thought I was supposed to spend more time on school work than on exercise. But gradually， I found that running was not only good for my health， but also helped me relieve stress. When I opened my arms and stretched my legs on the playground， I was like a deer running in the field， which made me get a sense of belonging. Every time I crossed the finish line， I would have an unspeakable sense of accomplishment and satisfaction. This made me fall in love with running.

In the recent period， I have been running in my free time. And I still enjoy the feelings. This has become a wonderful memory for me.

河南農(nóng)業(yè)大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)

指導(dǎo)老師 郭蒙蒙

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作者用總—分—總的順序?qū)懗隽伺懿浇o自己帶來的美好回憶。第二段用“At first ... But...”寫出了跑步給“我”帶來的成就感。“When I opened my arms and stretched my legs on the playground， I was like a deer running in the field ...” 一句運(yùn)用比喻修辭，生動(dòng)形象地寫出了“我”對(duì)跑步的感受。