同學(xué)們，你對(duì)時(shí)尚的理解是什么？時(shí)尚是一個(gè)時(shí)期的流行風(fēng)氣與社會(huì)環(huán)境，時(shí)尚引領(lǐng)潮流，是流行文化的表現(xiàn)之一。時(shí)尚可以指任何生活中的事物，例如，時(shí)尚發(fā)型、時(shí)尚人物、時(shí)尚生活、潮流品牌、潮流服飾等。讓我們看下面兩篇小短文，進(jìn)一步理解時(shí)尚吧。

During the hot summer, we often go to the beach in nice swimsuits. Now, a swimsuit with the Dunhuang mural patterns will make you surprised!

The swimsuit draws a deer pattern on its front. The idea is not from the designers, it is from the mural The Deer King.People found the mural in the cave of the Mogao Grottoes.

Right now,you can buy the swimsuit on Dunhuang Taobao.

Seeing the success of the Palace Museum, many more Chinese museums learn from it and also try to work with Taobao to introduce their cultural and creative products. In this way,more visitors experience the national treasures in a better way.

“By working with Taobao,we make more new products.We hope to combine traditional culture and modern fashion together. So, the visitors, especially young people, will be happy to know more about the Dunhuang culture,”said Shi Mingxiu, the curator of Dunhuang Museum.

the Dunhuang mural pattern 敦煌壁畫圖案 caven.洞穴

the Mogao Grottoes 莫高窟 successn.成功

creativeadj.有創(chuàng)意的 productn.產(chǎn)品

experiencev.體驗(yàn) nationaladj.國家的

combinev.合并 traditionaladj.傳統(tǒng)的 culturen.文化

AreyougoingtobuytheswimsuitwiththeDunhuangmuralpatterns?Whyorwhynot?

Qipao is a one-piece Chinese dress that was born in the 17th century. It was traditionally made of silk, a comfortable cloth. The style of the qipao has developed over the years and people still wear qipao today because it shows the unique beauty of Chinese women.

The qipao was wide and loose in the past. It would hide a woman’s body, except her head,hands,and feet.In the 1920s in Shanghai,the qipao was updated and became popular.

The qipao now is more fitting. It has a high cut on one or both sides. It may be sleeveless and made of different materials,not only silk.

Now, people do not wear qipao every day. They usually wear qipao on special occasions,like weddings or parties.

developv.發(fā)展 the unique beauty獨(dú)一無二的美 looseadj.寬松的

updaten.更新 fittingadj.合身的 sleevelessadj.無袖的

occasionn.場合

Ifyou’regoingtoabigpartyandtherewillbealotofforeign（外國的）friends,will youwearqipao?Whyorwhynot?

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假設(shè)你們年級(jí)正在舉辦一場時(shí)裝秀來展示大家的風(fēng)采以及對(duì)“fashion”的認(rèn)識(shí)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)問題，寫一篇100 詞左右的英語短文，介紹一下這場時(shí)裝秀的情況。

要點(diǎn)問題：

1.When and where do you give the fashion show?

2.Who are going for the fashion show?

3.What clothes do you see at the fashion show?

4.What do you think of their designs?

There is a fashion show in Grade 7.The fashion show begins at about 6 p.m. on Monday. Many students and teachers will go for the fashion show.

本段的時(shí)態(tài)需要重新思考，可以關(guān)注上下文和題目中的第2個(gè)要點(diǎn)問題。

Sandy is wearing a white cotton sweater and a blue scarf. Daniel is wearing white sports clothes and blue trainers. I think his trainers are light and comfortable.They are fit for a long walk. Sam looks smart in a white shirt and a pair of blue jeans. I think white shirts look clean. I like his design best because the shirt is comfortable, and jeans are popular among students.

句與句之間可以增加一些連詞，增強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性，讓句子之間的銜接更自然。

建議多角度評(píng)價(jià)模特的著裝，比如可以從衣服的搭配和顏色的匹配度入手。最喜歡Sam 的設(shè)計(jì)的理由不夠自然。

I like the fashion show.

結(jié)束語部分建議使用生動(dòng)的詞匯和句型來表達(dá)自己對(duì)此次時(shí)裝秀的喜愛之情。

It’s 6 p.m. on Monday. The Grade 7 students are giving a fashion show at the school hall. Many students are wearing clothes designed by themselves, and some of our teachers also join in the show.

We’re excited to see many different styles of clothes at the show.Sandy looks modern in a white cotton sweater and a blue scarf. Daniel is wearing white sports clothes and blue trainers. I’m sure he loves sports. How cool he looks! Also, his trainers are light and comfortable.I think they are fit for a long walk.Sam looks smart in a white shirt and a pair of blue jeans. The white shirt matches the blue jeans well. I like his design best because white and blue make him look clean,and jeans are really popular among students.

What a wonderful fashion show!I hope we can have fashion shows every year.

（江蘇省靖江外國語學(xué)校薛清雅）

本篇書面表達(dá)緊扣“時(shí)尚”展開，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，條理清晰。小作者生動(dòng)、詳細(xì)地描寫了模特的著裝，展示了中學(xué)生的風(fēng)采，并從款式、舒適度、搭配等多角度進(jìn)行了恰當(dāng)評(píng)價(jià)。

全文語言生動(dòng)，句式多樣，并適時(shí)使用了also、because 等連詞，使文章更流暢，更有層次感。結(jié)尾處，小作者合理使用感嘆句表達(dá)了對(duì)此次時(shí)裝秀的喜愛之情，并表明了自己的期盼，體現(xiàn)了小作者健康的審美情趣和對(duì)時(shí)尚生活的憧憬。

（江蘇省泰州市汪群初級(jí)中學(xué)胡婷）