It’s well known that English plays an important role in our communication. On the one hand， learning English well can make us become more confident. On the other hand， it is more convenient when we go abroad. So how can we learn English well To begin with， I think listening to English songs is the most interesting way to learn English. Secondly， watching an English movie is also a good choice. Thirdly， we should be more active in class. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes because “No one is perfect”. What’s more， to improve our English ability， we can join an English club. Last but not least， we can communicate with foreigners as much as possible.

In short， it’s important to learn English well. If we stick to these suggestions， we’ll become better than before because “Where there is a will， there is a way”.

河南省鄭州市第四十七初級中學

指導老師 石 芮

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這篇作文緊扣主題，分別從聽、說、讀、寫四個方面介紹了學習英語的方法。使用了“to begin with”“secondly”“thirdly”“what’s more”“l(fā)ast but not least”等詞或短語來陳述觀點，層次清晰。此外，文中還有一些詞組和句型，如“it’s well known that”“on the one hand”“on the other hand”“it is +adj. +to do sth.”“stick to”等，給文章增加了亮點。