賈從永1

四 級(jí)

Directions：

For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a foreign friend who wants to learn Chinese. Please recommend a city to him. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

2019年12月的大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試的三道作文題目要求考生給一位外國(guó)朋友寫一封信，本題要求向外國(guó)朋友推薦一個(gè)學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的城市。大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四、六級(jí)考試的書(shū)信只需包括三個(gè)部分：稱呼、正文、署名。由于這是一封寫給朋友的私人信函，稱呼可以直呼其名。比如，我們假設(shè)這位外國(guó)朋友名叫Alex，稱呼就可以寫Dear Alex。

這封書(shū)信的正文可以寫成三個(gè)段落。第一段交代寫這封信的目的——向?qū)Ψ酵扑]一個(gè)學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的城市。第二段首先建議朋友到北京學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)，然后陳述理由。為了使作文的字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)到規(guī)定要求，我們可以從三個(gè)方面詳述理由。首先，北京有許多一流高校，是中國(guó)的文化中心，在北京學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)可以深入了解中國(guó)文化。其次，普通話以北京語(yǔ)音為標(biāo)準(zhǔn)音，在北京可以學(xué)到純正的漢語(yǔ)發(fā)音。最后，除了園林和博物館之外，北京還有許多歷史古跡可以參觀，在北京不會(huì)感到無(wú)聊。第三段是一些客套話，如希望自己的建議對(duì)朋友有用，請(qǐng)他早日回信，期待在北京見(jiàn)到他等。這些客套話能讓書(shū)信顯得有禮貌，是英文書(shū)信中不可或缺的一部分。

正文下面是署名。署名一般寫在信紙的中間偏右的位置，分兩行書(shū)寫，上下對(duì)齊。由于這是一封寫給朋友的信，上一行可寫Yours truly（或Truly yours），下一行寫你的名字，如Li Ming。下面請(qǐng)看參考范文：

Dear Alex，

It was very nice to hear from you again. You asked me to recommend a city for you to study Chinese in. Im now writing to make some suggestions.

Id like to recommend Beijing， the capital city of China. Home to a number of the countrys most prestigious universities， it is the cultural centre of China. You can therefore gain an insight into the Chinese culture studying in Beijing. Also， residents here speak a dialect of Mandarin Chinese which forms the basis of Standard Chinese. A perfect language environment， isnt it？ Additionally， apart from gardens and museums， the city boasts a lot of historical sites. You will never feel bored， for there is always somewhere to go.

I hope my advice is helpful to you. Please reply soon. I am looking forward to seeing you in Beijing.

Yours truly，Li Ming （143 words）

語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)借鑒：

1. Home to a number of the countrys most prestigious universities， it is the cultural centre of China. 北京有許多中國(guó)最具聲譽(yù)的大學(xué)，是中國(guó)的文化中心。be home to（某地）有，如：California is home to many vineyards.加州有許多葡萄園。

2. You can therefore gain an insight into the Chinese culture studying in Beijing. 因而，在北京學(xué)習(xí)，你可以深入地了解中國(guó)文化。gain / get / have an insight into，深入了解。

3. Additionally， apart from gardens and museums， the city boasts a lot of historical sites. 此外，除了園林和博物館，北京還擁有許多歷史古跡。apart from，“除了……之外，還……”。boast，有（值得自豪的東西）。

六? ? ? 級(jí)

Directions：

For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of having a sense of community responsibility. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

本題要求考生論述具有社區(qū)責(zé)任感的重要性。我們?cè)谙鹿P寫這篇作文之前要仔細(xì)審題。在本題中，community的意思是all the people living in a specific locality。因此，它所指的范圍比society小。我們居住的小區(qū)、就讀的學(xué)校、工作的單位、生活的城市都可以看作是一個(gè)community。所以在論述具有社區(qū)責(zé)任感的重要性時(shí)，我們要更加側(cè)重于對(duì)自己周邊的人的責(zé)任。

本文宜寫成三個(gè)段落。第一段給社區(qū)責(zé)任感下一個(gè)通俗的定義，讓讀者知道本文論述的對(duì)象是什么。簡(jiǎn)單地說(shuō)，社區(qū)責(zé)任感就是一個(gè)人認(rèn)識(shí)到自己對(duì)所生活地區(qū)的其他人負(fù)有責(zé)任和義務(wù)。第二段論述具有社區(qū)責(zé)任感的重要意義。論述可以從兩個(gè)方面展開(kāi)：第一，具有社區(qū)責(zé)任感，我們就會(huì)通過(guò)慈善捐助或者做志愿者工作使世界變得更加美好，小小的善舉可以改變這個(gè)世界。第二，社區(qū)責(zé)任感會(huì)增加我們自己的幸福感。俗話說(shuō)，“授人玫瑰，手有余香”。比如，做志愿者工作會(huì)讓我們減少壓力、結(jié)識(shí)同道、忘掉自己的煩惱，從而感覺(jué)更加幸福。第三段先總結(jié)全文，指出強(qiáng)烈的社區(qū)責(zé)任感能改善世界并增加我們的幸福感，然后建議開(kāi)展一場(chǎng)宣傳活動(dòng)，在全社會(huì)提倡社區(qū)責(zé)任感。下面請(qǐng)看參考范文：

A sense of community responsibility refers to an awareness of ones obligations towards other members of his or her community. It is of special importance in a world that is far from perfect.

Why is a sense of community responsibility so important？ The answer is quite simple. Inspired by a sense of community responsibility， you can make the world a better place， whether by donating to charities or by becoming a volunteer. Any little act of kindness can make a big difference. Whats more， a sense of community responsibility boosts your happiness. Just as fragrance lingers in the hand that gives roses， volunteering in the community helps you reduce stress， meet like-minded people and take your mind off your own worries. Research has identified a link between volunteering and an increased sense of happiness.

A strong sense of community responsibility contributes to the betterment of the world and an increased feeling of well-being. It is therefore advised that a campaign be launched to encourage a sense of community responsibility in our society. （172 words）

語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)借鑒：

1. Just as fragrance lingers in the hand that gives roses， volunteering in the community helps you reduce stress， meet like-minded people and take your mind off your own worries. 正如授人玫瑰，手有余香，做志愿工作有助于你減少壓力、結(jié)識(shí)同道并忘掉自己的煩惱。take ones mind off，使某人忘掉。

2. Research has identified a link between volunteering and an increased sense of happiness.研究發(fā)現(xiàn)，做志愿工作能增加幸福感。

3. A strong sense of community responsibility contributes to the betterment of the world and an increased feeling of well-being.強(qiáng)烈的社區(qū)責(zé)任感有助于改善世界并增加幸福感。a feeling / sense of well-being幸福感。

4. It is therefore advised that a campaign be launched to encourage a sense of community responsibility in our society. 因此建議開(kāi)展一場(chǎng)運(yùn)動(dòng)，以便在社會(huì)上鼓勵(lì)社區(qū)責(zé)任感。“it is advised that… ”“建議……”。這是一個(gè)提建議的常用句型，后面的從句用虛擬語(yǔ)氣。 ? ? ? ?□