On June 29, 2021, Zhang Guimei was awarded the highest honor of the CPC—the July 1st Medal in the Great Hall of the People. This tough, devoted and selfless woman once again came into the publics view.
Born in 1957, Zhang has put down roots and built a life in the frontier for more than 40 years. In 2002, Zhang was a rural teacher in Huaping County in Yunnan. When she went to the mountains to visit her students homes, she found that there were so many girls of school age who could not attend school because of poverty and ignorance. She felt very shocked and confused.
In the end, she made a conclusion that only by providing them with free education could all this be changed. When she first put forward the proposal to build a high school for girls, people around her either thought she had a mental problem or laughed at her for being too unrealistic. However, Zhang Guimei really started to take action. In order to prepare the schools money, she even went to the streets of Kunming to beg and collect donations, but it was far from enough. With the care and attention of the CPC committees and governments at all levels, and the support and help of all sectors of society, Huaping High School for Girls became a reality in August, 2008.
However, half a year after she established the school, nine of its 17 teachers resigned because of the poor conditions. She didnt lose heart. Together with the rest of the teachers, Zhang managed to help all 94 students of the schools first intake be admitted to universities three years later. Due to years of heavy work and stress, Zhang suffers from more than 20 diseases, relying on a lot of medicine every day, and sometimes she feels so painful. But she never gives up. She often says, “People always have to do something while they are alive.” Under her leadership, over the past 12 years, the school has helped more than 1,800 impoverished (赤貧的) girls realize their dreams to further their studies at university, creating an “educational miracle” in the mountains. Through Zhangs tireless efforts, the school has been ranked the citys top school. Now, with great determination and perseverance, she is still striving for an unfulfilled wish—her students can be admitted to Tsinghua University or Peking University.
A person devotes all of her energy to one thing—the thing that benefits others. This is already commendable(值得贊揚(yáng)的)! Zhang Guimei deserves the award! Lets show our respect for teacher Zhang Guimei!
Activity A Reading for understanding
Ⅰ. Textcentered chunks
be awarded the highest honor 被授予最高榮譽(yù)
come into the publics view 進(jìn)入大眾視野
attend school 上學(xué)
put forward the proposal 提出建議;發(fā)表提議
take action 采取行動(dòng)
be far from enough 遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠
due to years of heavy work and stress 由于多年繁重的工作與壓力
suffer from 遭受……;患有……(疾?。?/p>
strive for 為……奮斗;爭(zhēng)取……
Ⅱ. Textcentered sentences
一、倒裝句
In the end, she made a conclusion that only by providing them with free education could all this be changed. 最后,她得出結(jié)論,只有給她們提供免費(fèi)的教育才有可能改變這一切。
【點(diǎn)石成金】當(dāng)“only+狀語(yǔ)”位于句首時(shí),后面所接的部分需要部分倒裝,起強(qiáng)調(diào)作用。
【運(yùn)用遷移】只有孜孜不倦地努力,我們才會(huì)取得成功。
二、非謂語(yǔ)
Under her leadership, over the past 12 years, the school has helped more than 1,800 impoverished girls realize their dreams to further their studies at university, creating an “educational miracle” in the mountains. 在她的帶領(lǐng)下,這所學(xué)校在過去的12年里幫助超過1,800名貧困女孩實(shí)現(xiàn)了上大學(xué)的夢(mèng)想,創(chuàng)造了山區(qū)里的“教育奇跡”。
【點(diǎn)石成金】此句中的creating... in the mountains是非謂語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ),其邏輯主語(yǔ)是前面的整個(gè)句子。
【運(yùn)用遷移】他總是在家里講笑話逗樂妻子和孩子,營(yíng)造了快樂的家庭氛圍。
Activity B Reading for writing
假定你是李華,你想以“The person I admire most”為題,給Crazy English寫一篇短文,介紹你最敬佩的一個(gè)人。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):
1. 人物簡(jiǎn)介;
2. 尊敬和愛戴的原因。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)80左右;
2. 短文題目已為你寫好;
3. 寫作時(shí),要遵循“ABCDE”原則,對(duì)人物的介紹要包括admiration、background、characteristics、deeds,以及evaluation這5個(gè)基本要素。
The person I admire most
寫作導(dǎo)引
本次的寫作任務(wù)是寫一篇人物簡(jiǎn)介,要求學(xué)生能簡(jiǎn)單地介紹優(yōu)秀的人物,學(xué)會(huì)重整文本信息,學(xué)習(xí)并掌握與主題相關(guān)的表達(dá),如外貌、出生背景、個(gè)人經(jīng)歷、教育狀況、興趣愛好、生活態(tài)度、重大貢獻(xiàn)、優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)、人物評(píng)價(jià)等。這些寫作要求和所給語(yǔ)篇的主題語(yǔ)境是緊密相關(guān)的。
一、語(yǔ)篇解碼
(一)內(nèi)容分析
What is the text mainly about?
(二)宏觀結(jié)構(gòu)
Fill in the blanks according to the text.
二、素材積累
(一)語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)活動(dòng)的核心表達(dá)
1. be awarded the prize for 被授予……獎(jiǎng);獲……獎(jiǎng)
2. come out in front 名列前茅
3. spare no effort to do sth 不遺余力地做某事
4. have a gift for 對(duì)……有天賦
5. be deeply influenced by 深受……的影響
(二)人物描寫的核心表達(dá)
1. Thanks to/Owing to/Due to his unique , he won numerous awards in his lifetime. 由于他獨(dú)特的 ,他一生中獲得了無數(shù)獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)。
2. Having graduated from high school, he majored in at Massachusetts Institute of Technology, after which he entered Harvard University for further study. 高中畢業(yè)后,他進(jìn)入麻省理工學(xué)院攻讀 專業(yè),之后進(jìn)入哈佛大學(xué)深造。
3. So distinguished an is he that he is known as the . 他是如此杰出的一個(gè) ,以至于他被稱為 。
4. His gentle manner, his eloquence in conversation, and his ability to make all the people feel at home surprised me very much. 他溫文爾雅的舉止,口若懸河的談吐,以及那種令人賓至如歸的能力令我大為驚嘆。
三、寫作支架
(人名), born in (時(shí)間), is recognized as one of the most outstanding in the world today.
He/She is popular with people of all ages. I admire him/her because he/she has made great contributions to . (原因) It is his/her contributions that make possible for us to . (貢獻(xiàn)) Every time I see the pictures in which he/she spared no effort to , I cannot help being moved by him/her.
He/She is so (優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)) that he/she deserves all the respect from others.
四、語(yǔ)篇過手
在構(gòu)思語(yǔ)篇框架時(shí),我們應(yīng)注意遵循“ABCDE”原則,即對(duì)人物的介紹要包括admiration、background、characteristics、deeds,以及evaluation這5個(gè)基本要素??傇~數(shù)控制在80左右。還應(yīng)學(xué)習(xí)并運(yùn)用前文中出現(xiàn)的倒裝句或非謂語(yǔ)等高級(jí)句型,同時(shí),注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞。