王立新
【技巧點(diǎn)撥】
一、技法指導(dǎo)
介紹旅游地點(diǎn)通常是以說(shuō)明為主、描寫為輔、敘述為主線的說(shuō)明文。寫作時(shí)要做到要點(diǎn)全面,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔明了,引人入勝。時(shí)態(tài)常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
在描寫過(guò)程中,用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言說(shuō)明它的地理位置、人文歷史以及旅游路線等。這種文章的寫法比較靈活,在描寫的過(guò)程中可以抒發(fā)感情,夾敘夾議。一篇好的文章不僅能引導(dǎo)讀者跟作者一起欣賞美麗的風(fēng)景,還能啟迪人的思想,陶冶人的情操,給人以美的享受。
二、常用句式
1. 介紹地理位置:be located in...; be situated in...; lie in...; stand at the foot of / on the top of...
2. 介紹氣候:the weather / climate there is...; it is warm all year around; rain a lot
3. 介紹人口:... has a population of...; a city / country with a population of...
4. 介紹面積:... has / covers an area of... square kilometers; (a city) with an area of... square kilometers
5. 介紹歷史:... has a long history of... years; has witnessed too much coming and going in history
6. 介紹名勝古跡:places of interest / historical spots
7. 介紹特色:(The place) is famous for...; The special character of the place is...
8. 介紹交通:It is very convenient for...; The best way to experience... is...; It takes... to take a bus from... to...; ... is only 20 minutes' drive from downtown; ... is within easy reach
三、實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練
假設(shè)你是李華,你的美國(guó)朋友Tom打算去臺(tái)灣旅行,特來(lái)信向你了解臺(tái)灣島的有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示寫一封回信,簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下臺(tái)灣島的情況,并祝他旅途愉快。
1. 臺(tái)灣是我國(guó)最大的島嶼,位于福建省的東南部,北臨東海,東臨太平洋,西南面被南海環(huán)抱;
2. 臺(tái)灣島面積約三萬(wàn)六千平方公里,人口兩千多萬(wàn);
3. 自然資源豐富,香蕉、稻米、茶葉等農(nóng)產(chǎn)品馳名中外;
4. 風(fēng)景優(yōu)美,氣候宜人,世界各地的游客紛至沓來(lái)。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 信的格式及開(kāi)頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
3. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫,符合邏輯。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to know that you're going to Taiwan Island.
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Yours,
Li Hua
審題要點(diǎn):
1. 人稱:第一人稱和第三人稱
2. 時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)
聯(lián)想詞匯:
a brief introduction to ……的簡(jiǎn)介
lie (to the) west of... 位于……之西
to the west of... 在……的西邊
have an area of... square kilometers 占地……平方公里
have a population of... 有……人口
be rich in... 在……方面豐富
natural resources 自然資源
at home and abroad 國(guó)內(nèi)外
so... that... 如此……以至于……
參考范文:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to know that you're going to Taiwan Island. As your Chinese friend, I'd like to give you a brief introduction to it.
Taiwan Island, the largest island in our country, lies west of the Pacific Ocean, with the East Sea on the north and the South Sea surrounding its southwest. To the west of the island is Fujian, another province of China.
Taiwan has an area of about 36,000 square kilometers and a population of over 20,000,000. It's rich in natural resources. Bananas, rice, tea and so on are famous both at home and abroad. The scenery is so beautiful and the climate is so pleasant that travelers all over the world go in a continuous stream for a visit. I'm sure you'll have a lot fun there. Wish to see you as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【寫作訓(xùn)練】
假定你是李華,英語(yǔ)課上老師要求根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇短文,簡(jiǎn)要介紹加拿大的情況。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫,符合邏輯。
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