吳安運

◎文體概述

朋友或同學考試失利、親友生病、受傷或由于火災、水災、被盜等不幸事件蒙受了損失，我們都可以寫封信表示安慰。安慰信要寫得真誠，注意措辭。寫安慰信時一定要圍繞一個中心——使收信人從中得到安慰和鼓舞。

模板范文

Dear Tom，

Im very sorry to hear that you are seriously ill and that you have been in hospital for about two weeks. We are very concerned about you and your studies.

Our head teacher is coming to see you today， so we ask him to bring you a package， with some lucky stars and colorful paper cranes in it. I hope you will like it and it will bring good luck to you. Also youll receive 10，000 yuan， which will help you pay the medical fees. Dont worry about your studies. Well try to help you make up the lessons you have missed， because we are good friends. I hope I can come and see you soon on Sunday.

Everyone in our class misses you very much， hoping youll be well again and get back soon.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

◎經(jīng)典句型

篇首句：表達慰問事由

1.I feel very sad to know that there was... 聽說發(fā)生了……我感到非常難過。

2.I was shocked at the news about the earthquake in... 聽聞……地震的消息我很震驚。

3.Seeing the related...， I could not help... 看到相關的……，我禁不住……

4.We are so sorry to hear the news about... 聽到……的消息我們很難過。

5.I just heard that youve been on the sickness last week. 我剛剛得知上個星期你病了。

6.I was deeply concerned when I learned that... 當?shù)弥瓡r，我非常擔心。

7.I just cant tell you how sorry I was to learn of your... 獲悉你……時，我難以形容我有多難過。

8.I read about the recent events in the newspaper and I am writing to extend my deepest sadness. 我從報紙上得知了最近的事情，寫信表達我深切的悲痛。

篇尾句：鼓勵與問候

1.Still you have many more chances to try. 你仍然有很多機會可以嘗試。

2.Im certainly relieved to know that. 知道這一情況后，我心中感到很寬慰。

3.I am sure you will easily succeed next time. 我相信你下次會輕松地取得成功。

4.I quite understand how you feel now. 我非常理解你現(xiàn)在的感受。

5.Please pass my concern on to your parents. 請代我向你的父母問好。

6.So I hope that you will not take this to heart， and will get ready to try again. 因此，希望你不要太在意這件事，準備好再試一次。

7.I hope you like it， and that it will help to pass the time more pleasantly. 我希望你喜歡它，并希望它能幫助你更愉快地度過時光。

8.With every good wish for your swift recovery. 衷心祝愿你盡快恢復健康。

9.We are looking forward to/hoping/praying for your speedy and full recovery. 我們希望/祈禱你能早日完全康復。

10.Please extend our deep sympathy to your family. 請向你的家人轉(zhuǎn)達我們的深切慰問。

11.If there is anything I can do to help you， please let me know. 如果有需要我?guī)椭牡胤?，請告訴我。

12.If you need any help， please do not hesitate to contact us. 如果你需要任何幫助，請隨時聯(lián)系我們。

◎典例鏈接

（2017屆山西省五校高三第四次聯(lián)考）假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Jack因爸爸過度飲酒而感到非常苦惱，就此請你用英語給他寫一封郵件。主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示安慰：

2.給出建議;

3.寄予希望。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文流暢;

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jack，

Im sorry to hear that your father is addicted to drinking.

Best wishes. Im looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

【試題解讀】

1.審題立意

該篇書面表達的命題思路采用的是應用文的考查形式，是提綱類作文，但其形式又是以郵件的模式給出，而最終又要求考生用近年來高考較為普遍的書信體裁進行寫作，體現(xiàn)了高考命題的穩(wěn)定性。

從測試內(nèi)容上來看，寫作的主題為“安慰朋友并提出建議”，這提醒考生要關注生活，雖看似平淡，但事實上教育學生要關愛他人，珍惜生命。

從寫作提示上來看，試題仍然具有一定的開放性，給各位考生留出了一定的自由發(fā)揮空間，有利于考生充分展示自己的英語書面表達能力。這次英語書面表達試題還是采用了以往的書信形式， 試題中已經(jīng)寫好了開頭和結(jié)尾，考生不必考慮和擔心書信格式的問題，可以直接按照材料提示的有關內(nèi)容進入主題，這有利于幫助考生增強信心，順利答題。

2.寫作要點

（1）導入話題;

（2）安慰朋友;

（3）給出建議;

（4）寄予希望。

3.注意事項

（1）注意文章內(nèi)容的詳略，建議部分要詳寫，另兩點內(nèi)容略寫;

（2）語氣要真誠中肯。

【佳作賞析】

Dear Jack，

Im sorry to hear that your father is addicted to drinking. Dont worry. Im always here， ready to help you①.

As is known， getting rid of drinking is not easy， so you should be patient with it and give your father a little time. First of all②， find out why your father is addicted to drinking and try to communicate with him about this. Then②， you should think of ways that fit your fathers situation. Maybe changing your fathers taste， like drinking tea instead of wine， is a good choice③. Besides②， it is important to make your father know the potential danger of drinking. Also②， you can ask doctors for help. I hope the suggestions are available④ to you and your father will be happier and healthier with the help.

Best wishes. Im looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?亮點分析：本篇習作將建議一條條列舉出來，使人一目了然，且思路清唽，交代非常清楚。字里行間情真意切，讀來非常感人。運用了一些適當?shù)倪^渡詞及高級句式結(jié)構(gòu)，如形容詞短語作狀語、動名詞做主語、定語從句等，同時

available等高級詞匯的使用，也使文章增色不少，總的來說是一篇好文章。

①作者沒有用兩個簡單句或并列句的形式來表達，而是獨辟蹊徑，使用了形容詞短語ready to help you作伴隨狀語。

②作者用First of all、Then、Besides和Also等過渡詞一條一條地陳述他的建議，層次分明。

③作者在此用動名詞形式changing your fathers taste作句子主語，后面還對這個做法進行舉例，語言運用非常老道。

④作者在這里運用了高級詞匯available，一詞勝千言，言簡意深，足見作者的語言能力?！蛐≡嚺５?/p>

假定你是李華，你收到美國好友Jack的來信，他說他期末考試考得不好，受到父母的批評，情緒很低落。請你根據(jù)以下要點給Jack寫一封信：

1.安慰對方;

2.正確對待考試;

3.與父母多溝通;

4.鼓勵對方。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Jack，

Yours，

Li Hua