黃浩

減負(fù)之后，中學(xué)生有了更多的課余時間，是選擇暫時放下繁重的課業(yè)，去戶外享受美好青春時光，還是讀一本書、看一場電影？如何讓課余時間更有意義？聽聽孩子們怎么說。

習(xí)作開頭如下：“Nowadays， we students have much more free time than ever before.”

胡林豪 九年級

最喜歡的英語格言：The good seaman is known in bad weather.驚濤駭浪，方顯英雄本色。

習(xí)作：

Nowadays， we students have much more free time than ever before. But quite a number of students in our school dont know how to make good use of their spare time. Some of them play computer games， some watch TV and some chat with others.

I think these activities are meaningless. We can make better use of our spare time by doing the following：

First， we can do more sports to make us stronger and healthier. Second， joining in social activities is a good way to know the world outside our campus. Third， read more books. Books are our friends. At last， try to do some housework. Doing some housework will make you love your parents more.

In a word， dont waste your time any more.

點(diǎn)評：

作者先用“Some...，some...and some...”列舉同學(xué)們的行為，然后闡明自己的觀點(diǎn)，用“First...Second...Third...At last...”給出建議，用法準(zhǔn)確、思路清晰。

沈沁怡 九年級

最喜歡的英語格言：The secret of success is to keep your goals and beliefs. 成功的秘訣在于堅(jiān)持自己的目標(biāo)和信念。

習(xí)作：

Nowadays， we students have more free time than ever before. But quite a number of students in our school dont make good use of it. Some students often watch TV， some students play computer games several hours a day， and other students chat with their friends in their spare time.

I dont think these are good practices. Some students in our school agree with me. There are many interesting things we can do. We can take part in some social activities to help others. We can do sports to keep healthy and do housework to help our parents. If you feel tired， it also should be a good idea to read more books because by doing so well enrich our knowledge.

What do you think about it？ If you agree with me， lets do it together.

點(diǎn)評：

作者以 “I dont think ...”過渡，觀點(diǎn)鮮明。在提出建議時，用到了“it is a good idea to do sth.”這一句型。

倪福雪？九年級

最喜歡的英語格言：Opportunity is always ready for the people to get. 機(jī)遇永遠(yuǎn)屬于準(zhǔn)備好的人。

習(xí)作：

Nowadays， we students have much more free time than ever before. But many students in our school dont make good use of their spare time. They spend too much time in watching TV， playing computer games， chatting with others on their computer， and so on.

In my opinion， both playing computer games and chatting with others on computer are boring. I think it is important to make better use of our spare time. We can take part in interest groups or read more books. If you are kind， you can take part in social activities to help others. Doing sports to keep healthy is also a good idea. And if you are at home， remember to do some housework to help your parents.

If you do so， you will feel happier than before.

點(diǎn)評：

作者用到了“sb. spend some time in doing sth.”的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，簡潔明了。給建議，用到了“it is important to do sth.”句型。

徐夢茹 九年級

最喜歡的英語格言： Never give up is the only secret of your dream. 永不放棄是你夢想實(shí)現(xiàn)的唯一秘訣。

習(xí)作：

Nowadays， we students have much more free time than ever before. But quite a number of students in our school spend too much time on computer games， and some are busy watching TV or chatting with others. I feel worried about these problems. These things can distract students attention from their studies. Therefore， I suggest that students should make better use of their spare time. My suggestions are as follows：

We can take part in an interest group in which we can learn what we like. When we are at home， we can help our parents to do some housework. Let them know we love them. Books are our good friends. It will be helpful to us to read some books.

Dont waste your time anymore. Lets do something meaningful.

點(diǎn)評：

該文用到了“sb. spend some time on sth.”及“sb. be busy doing sth.”的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，therefore一詞起到了承上啟下的作用。

胡雨成 九年級

最喜歡的英語格言： The value of life， not with time， but with the depth to be measured. 人生的價值，并不是用時間，而是用深度去衡量的。

習(xí)作：

Nowadays， we students have much more free time than ever before. In our school， watching TV， playing computer games and chatting with others are common in some students spare time.

That is to say， those students dont make good use of their spare time. That is bad， not only study but also their health. There are some suggestions about making good use of our spare time. First， we can take part in social activities and interest groups. Second， we can read more books to enrich our knowledge. Third， we can do sports to keep fit.

Dont play computer games again. Its time for us to do something useful. Only in this way can we make full use of our spare time.

點(diǎn)評：

插入語“That is to say”讓文章過渡自然。用“not only...but also...”的結(jié)構(gòu)來說明浪費(fèi)時間的壞處，用法得當(dāng)。