江蘇省興化市大垛中心校 九年級（2）班 孫雨石

In our daily life，we can't avoid associating with people in the world，so it is important for us to know how to get along well with others.

In my opinion，to get along well with others and win their friendships，we must remember the following words：

First，we need to be honest with others.Telling lies surely makes people stay far away from you.Just as an old saying goes，“Honesty is the best policy.”Second，we should be modest enough.If we are proud in public，we can hardly win others'respect，not to mention “friendship”.Finally，we mustn't be selfish.We should learn to share.And we should learn not only how to care about others but also how to help the people in need.

If we obey the ways which is mentioned above，we will find it much easy to get along well with others.

教師點(diǎn)評：

這是一篇介紹如何與他人和睦相處的習(xí)作。全文主題突出，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，詳略得當(dāng)。avoid、care about、hardly等詞及定語從句、賓語從句、狀語從句等從句的運(yùn)用體現(xiàn)了作者較強(qiáng)的寫作功力。但如能將最后一段中的much easy改為much easier，表達(dá)會更加恰當(dāng)。

（指導(dǎo)教師：趙耀衛(wèi)）