寫(xiě)作是對(duì)學(xué)生運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)的綜合能力的考查,是最能體現(xiàn)學(xué)生英語(yǔ)水平的一種檢測(cè)方式。學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程當(dāng)中經(jīng)常暴露一些弱點(diǎn)、犯一些錯(cuò)誤?,F(xiàn)對(duì)學(xué)生英語(yǔ)作文中的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤按語(yǔ)法類(lèi)別進(jìn)行歸納,并舉以實(shí)例,希望同學(xué)們能夠由此發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的問(wèn)題并及時(shí)改正!
寫(xiě)作中,學(xué)生們常把握不好名詞的數(shù)、所有格以及一些集合名詞的用法。
1.He gave me a very good advice yesterday.
點(diǎn)撥:句中的a要去掉,因?yàn)閍dvice是不可數(shù)名詞。一些漢語(yǔ)概念為可數(shù)的詞在英語(yǔ)中卻是不可數(shù)的,表示數(shù)量時(shí)在其前加a piece of,類(lèi)似的詞有news,bread,work,paper,chalk,furniture,information等。
2.That girl loves reading book.
點(diǎn)撥:可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)不能孤零零地放在句子里,或前面加冠詞,或?qū)⑵渥優(yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)。此處最好變?yōu)閎ooks。
3.He went into a book's shop and bought a dictionary.
點(diǎn)撥:一般表示有生命的東西的名詞的所有格用's,如my mother's car,而此處適宜用名詞修飾名詞,改為a book shop。
4.My family is watching TV.
點(diǎn)撥:一些集合名詞如看成一個(gè)整體,則用單數(shù)的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞,如My family is a happy one;如強(qiáng)調(diào)集合中每個(gè)個(gè)體的個(gè)人行為,則用復(fù)數(shù)的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。此處看電視是個(gè)體行為,應(yīng)把is改為are。類(lèi)似的詞有team,class,audience等。
5.I bought some potatos and tomatos at the supermarket.
點(diǎn)撥:中學(xué)階段以“o”結(jié)尾的名詞中有四個(gè)詞變復(fù)數(shù)時(shí)要加es,它們是tomato,potato,Negro,hero;其余的都加s變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)。
6.This has nothing to do with their believes.(這和他們的信仰沒(méi)關(guān)系。)
點(diǎn)撥:以f,fe結(jié)尾的詞變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)時(shí)一般去f,fe加ves,如knife—knives,thief—thieves;而roof和belief直接加s變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)。所以應(yīng)把believes改為beliefs。
7.The boss wants to hire an useful person.
點(diǎn)撥:用a還是an,取決于后面單詞的第一個(gè)音標(biāo),如為元音用an,為輔音用a。useful的第一個(gè)音是輔音所以應(yīng)把a(bǔ)n改為a。類(lèi)似的,我們說(shuō)a European country。
8.Plane is a machine that can fly.
點(diǎn)撥:plane為可數(shù)名詞單數(shù),不能單獨(dú)放在句中,應(yīng)在其前加冠詞或把它變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù),而本句后有a machine,因此只能在其前面加a,變?yōu)锳 plane。
9.He played a piano at the party yesterday.
點(diǎn)撥:把a(bǔ)改為the,因?yàn)椤皃lay+樂(lè)器名詞樂(lè)器”結(jié)構(gòu)中,樂(lè)器名詞前用定冠詞。
10.The machine was invented in 1920s.
點(diǎn)撥:在in后加the,因?yàn)楸硎灸甏胕n加the再加幾十的復(fù)數(shù),如在八十年代in the 80s。
11.Xiao Hong went to school by the bus every day.
點(diǎn)撥:去掉the,因?yàn)楸硎窘煌ǚ绞接胋y直接加交通工具。
使用代詞時(shí)請(qǐng)注意其單、復(fù)數(shù),主、賓格以及形容詞性物主代詞和名詞性物主代詞的用法。
12.He is one of those speakers who make his ideas perfectly clear.
點(diǎn)撥:定語(yǔ)從句的先行詞是those speakers,為復(fù)數(shù),因此從句中的指示代詞應(yīng)為復(fù)數(shù),應(yīng)把his改為their。
13.Whom do you think has left the lights on?
點(diǎn)撥:放在疑問(wèn)句特殊疑問(wèn)詞后的do you think/believe/guess/imagine/suppose等都不參與句子成分,把它們?nèi)サ艉?,疑?wèn)詞在句中作主語(yǔ)用主格,作賓語(yǔ)用賓格。本句中去掉do you think后缺的是主語(yǔ),應(yīng)把Whom改為Who。
14.The boss pretended not to see John and I.點(diǎn)撥:John和I在句中都作賓語(yǔ),應(yīng)把I改為me。15.These books are mine;those in the bag are her.
點(diǎn)撥:Her是形容詞性物主代詞,后面應(yīng)該加名詞books,或把her改為hers。
16.There are fourteen hundreds students in our school.
點(diǎn)撥:Hundred/thousand/million/score/dozen等詞前有具體數(shù)字時(shí)后不加s,前面沒(méi)有具體數(shù)字時(shí)在其后加s和of,表示大約幾百幾千的概念。如 two hundred students(兩百個(gè)學(xué)生),hundreds of students(成百上千個(gè)學(xué)生)。例句中應(yīng)把hundreds改為hundred。
17.Their school is twice as larger as our school.點(diǎn)撥:表倍數(shù)關(guān)系的as——as中間只能用形容詞或副詞的原級(jí)。因此把larger改為large。
18.Today's homework is a five-hundred-words composition.
點(diǎn)撥:幾個(gè)單詞由連字符連接而組成的復(fù)合形容詞中的名詞只能用單數(shù),所以把five-hundred-words改為five-hundred-word。
19.Two third of the students in our school are from America.
點(diǎn)撥:英語(yǔ)表達(dá)中分?jǐn)?shù)的分子用基數(shù)詞,分母用序數(shù)詞,分子大于一時(shí)分母后要加s,所以就把third改為thirds。
形容詞和副詞容易被誤用,形容詞和副詞的比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)也是應(yīng)注意的重點(diǎn)。
20.The patient appeared nervously when he talked to the doctor.
點(diǎn)撥:appear在此是個(gè)系動(dòng)詞,其后應(yīng)接形容詞作表語(yǔ)。所以把nervously改為nervous。
21.The artist worked hardly to finish his drawings on time.
點(diǎn)撥:此句需要一個(gè)副詞來(lái)修飾,hardly是副詞,但意為 “幾乎不”,hard也可以是副詞,表努力,因此把hardly改為hard。
22.This shirt is more cheaper than that one.
點(diǎn)撥:More只構(gòu)成比較級(jí),而不能修飾比較級(jí)。因此把more去掉。
23.He is the most successful of the two businessmen.
點(diǎn)撥:兩者相比較時(shí),比較級(jí)前用定冠詞,三者或三者以上才用most,因此把most改為more。
24.He works less harder than he used to.
點(diǎn)撥:表“不如……”時(shí)用less加上形容詞和副詞的原級(jí),因此把harder改為hard。
25.The book is fairly more interesting than that one.
點(diǎn)撥:fairly只能修飾形容詞和副詞的原級(jí),可以修飾比較級(jí)的副詞或短語(yǔ)有much,even,still,far,a lot,a little,a bit,any,no,by far,rather等,因此把fairly改為rather。
26.This is as an interesting a story as the one in the magazine.
點(diǎn)撥:as...as中間的詞序是as加上形容詞加上a(n)加上名詞再加上as,因此應(yīng)改為as interesting a story as the one。
27.The weather here is nicer than Xizang.
點(diǎn)撥:同樣的事物才能相比較,weather和Xizang不具有可比性,因此應(yīng)改為T(mén)he weather here is nicer than that of Xizang。
28.I would rather take a train than went by bus.
點(diǎn)撥:本句為 “would rather do...than do...”句型,因此把went改為go。
29.Is there interesting anything at the meeting?
點(diǎn)撥:修飾anything,something,everything,nothing的形容詞都要放在它們的后面。
30.I never have seen such a person before.
點(diǎn)撥:像never之類(lèi)的副詞在句中應(yīng)放在be動(dòng)詞、助動(dòng)詞之后,實(shí)意動(dòng)詞之前。因?yàn)閼?yīng)改為I have never seen such a person before。
31.The book is worth to be read.
點(diǎn)撥:be worth doing意為值得被做。因此改為T(mén)he book is worth reading。
32.It is sure that he will succeed.
點(diǎn)撥:sure的主語(yǔ)只能為人,而certain的主語(yǔ)可為人和物。因此把sure改為certain。
33.He is regarded as one of the best alive writers at present.
點(diǎn)撥:alive為表語(yǔ)形容詞,偶爾也作后置定語(yǔ)。因此把a(bǔ)live改為living,或把a(bǔ)live放在writers后面。34.I don't know that he has finished the work yet.點(diǎn)撥:yet用于否定和疑問(wèn)句,already用于肯定句。把yet改為already。
35.He said nearly nothing at the meeting.
點(diǎn)撥:nearly不與否定詞用在同一個(gè)句子中,而almost可以。因此把nearly改為almost。
36.He usually goes to school by his father's car.
點(diǎn)撥:by加上名詞表示一種交通方式,中間什么都不加,如by car,by bus,by plane等;如果名詞前有其他的詞修飾,則應(yīng)除by以外的其他介詞,此處把by改為in。
37.Please wait me at the school gate.
點(diǎn)撥:wait為不及物動(dòng)詞,需加介詞for后才能再跟名詞或代詞作賓語(yǔ)。
38.He has been married with Betty for more than twenty years.
點(diǎn)撥:marry不跟 with連用,應(yīng)把with改為to。
39.I finished the work on time under the help of him.
點(diǎn)撥:“在……的幫助下”用with而不用under。
40.He into the classroom alone.
點(diǎn)撥:英語(yǔ)中的有些介詞翻譯成中文時(shí)常具有“動(dòng)詞”的含義,但不能作謂語(yǔ)。應(yīng)在“into”前加上went。
41.He can be at home now because the light in his room is still on.
點(diǎn)撥:表特別有把握的肯定判斷時(shí)用must,表特別有把握的否定判斷時(shí)用can,can表判斷時(shí)只用在否定句中。因此把can改為must。
42.He need come here before the meeting begins.
點(diǎn)撥:作情態(tài)動(dòng)詞時(shí)need用在否定,疑問(wèn)和條件句中,不能用于肯定句中,而作實(shí)意動(dòng)詞時(shí)則可以。所以應(yīng)改為:He needs to come here before the meeting begins。
43.He used to get up very early in the morning,and now he is still doing so.
點(diǎn)撥:used to用來(lái)表示過(guò)去常常做某事而現(xiàn)在不了,所以應(yīng)把后半句改為:but now he is not doing so。
44.I needn't come yesterday because all the work had been finished.
點(diǎn)撥:由于情態(tài)動(dòng)詞本身不體現(xiàn)時(shí)態(tài),所以在談?wù)撨^(guò)去的事情時(shí)在情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后加 have done,因此在needn't后加have。
45.You hadn't better stay up too late because you have to get up early tomorrow.
點(diǎn)撥:had better的否定在 better后面加not。
英語(yǔ)的常用時(shí)態(tài)有十六種,一般根據(jù)上下文和時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)來(lái)確定時(shí)態(tài)。
46.I will tell her about that when she will come tomorrow.
點(diǎn)撥:主句為將來(lái)時(shí),其時(shí)間、條件、方式和讓步狀語(yǔ)從句中用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。因此將will come改為comes。
47.The meeting is about to begin in ten minutes.
點(diǎn)撥:be about to一般不與具體的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)連用。因此把in ten minutes去掉。
48.The boy opened his eyes for a moment,looking at the captain and then died.
點(diǎn)撥:此處look并非伴隨狀語(yǔ),而是三個(gè)并列的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞,因此把looking改為looked。
49.I have bought this bike for ten years and I am still using it now.
當(dāng)句中有for加一段時(shí)間作狀語(yǔ)時(shí),謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞必須為延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞,此處把bought改為kept。
50.I haven't learnt any English before I came here.
點(diǎn)撥:我來(lái)這兒已經(jīng)是過(guò)去的動(dòng)作,在此之前發(fā)生的事應(yīng)該用過(guò)去完成時(shí)。因此應(yīng)把haven't改為hadn't。