Learn to Smile

As the saying goes, attitude is everything. Since a smile is a positive attitude, we can often smile to ourselves to become confdent and happy. Although there are some situations where we may experience hardship or even failure, we can always smile to ourselves. It can help us overcome many diffculties as well as succeed in the end.

Learning to smile to others is also benefcial. When we smile to others, we can get a smile in return. Then it can put us in a good mood. What’s more, it can also help with a good relationship with others.

In one word, smiling is a language which can help others understand us better. Therefore, let’s start to smile and live a better and happier life.

江蘇省連云港市羅陽(yáng)中學(xué) 九年（1）班 劉雅潔

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