學(xué)生風(fēng)采展示板

My Life in Ten Years

Have you thought about your life in ten years? What will it be like?

I think I will be an artist in ten years, because I love painting very much. I will be famous and rich. I will sell my paintings and make good use of the money to build a big house for poor families and the children without parents. I will give the money to people who need help. I will try my best to help people all over the world.

I think my life will be happy if my dream to be an artist comes true. And helping others will make me happy, too.

To make my dream come true, I must try and practice painting as hard as I can!

江蘇省連云港市羅陽中學(xué) 八年（2）班 董淑晴

陳傳光老師點(diǎn)評：

每個人都對未來滿是憧憬，那么你所期望的未來生活是什么樣子的呢？董淑晴同學(xué)在這里分享了自己心目中十年后的生活。小作者希望十年后自己能成為一名藝術(shù)家，并盡自己最大的努力幫助那些有困難的人，這種精神值得稱贊和學(xué)習(xí)。在文章結(jié)尾，小作者還表達(dá)出為實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想要努力學(xué)習(xí)、勤奮畫畫的決心，升華了文章的主題。

My Childhood

My childhood has gone and will never come back. Yet I still cannot forget those happy days of my childhood.

I was brought up by my grandmother. She loved me very much. Every night, I sat by her after supper and listened to her fascinating stories. How I liked those tales! They always brought me to a different world. When I fell sick and had to be in bed, my grandmother took good care of me and made all kinds of delicious food for me. We also kept a little cat. He loved to run in the yard and play with a ball. I was glad that I had a friend to play with every day.

The memory of my childhood is like a sweet dream.

江蘇省連云港市羅陽中學(xué) 八年（2）班 吳世龍

陳傳光老師點(diǎn)評：

本文是一篇回憶童年生活的記敘文。在文章開頭，小作者感嘆童年的快樂時(shí)光一去不復(fù)返，接著描述了自己在童年時(shí)期和祖母生活的幾個片段，讓人感受到祖母對小作者那深深的愛。語言雖然樸實(shí)，卻表現(xiàn)出了童年生活的簡單與快樂。最后，作者再次感嘆童年就像是一場美夢，很好地引起了讀者的共鳴。整篇文章文字流暢、用詞得當(dāng)，是一篇不錯的學(xué)生習(xí)作。

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