How I Began to Learn English

My name is Zhang Hua.As my parents are both engaged in English study,I showed great interest in English even when I was a very little girl.Whenever my father was reading English,I always sat at the desk listening to him quietly.His reading sounded so interesting to me.Soon they began to teach my①English and I learned quickly and happily.

I studied English even harder after I got a chance to talk with an American.That took place when my father took me to Jinan where I happened to meet an American woman in a park.She insisted on to take②a photo for me.I agreed.Then I said in English,“Thank you very much.”Hearing this she was surprised.She patted me on my③head and asked me,“How old are you?”I told her that I was nine.She held up her thumb and smiled.

After I entered into④the middle school,I learned more and more English.Last year I won the first prize in the English contest of the whole city.This was a newmilestone(里程碑)in the long course of my English study.I will work hard on English.I want to be an English teacher when I grow up.

山東梁山楊營(yíng)中學(xué)九年級(jí)（三）班 張華

【欄目要求】

1.將學(xué)生習(xí)作根據(jù)中考分值給出成績(jī); 2.在應(yīng)該修改的地方劃線并標(biāo)注序號(hào);

3.根據(jù)所標(biāo)序號(hào)進(jìn)行修改并說明修改的理由; 4.給學(xué)生習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng)〈優(yōu)點(diǎn)與不足〉;

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石繼忠男，1989年參加工作，中學(xué)高級(jí)教師，濟(jì)寧市骨干教師，市級(jí)教學(xué)能手。工作中，立足實(shí)際，認(rèn)真搞好教學(xué)，創(chuàng)造性地開展學(xué)校的教育教學(xué)、教改科研工作，在教育這片田園里勤奮耕耘，積極探索，不斷改進(jìn)教學(xué)手段，吸收先進(jìn)的教育理念，在多年的英語(yǔ)教學(xué)工作中，積累了豐富的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，形成了自己獨(dú)特的教學(xué)方法。從教以來一直擔(dān)任初中畢業(yè)班的教學(xué)工作，在歷年的中考中，所執(zhí)教的班級(jí)都取得了優(yōu)異的成績(jī)，受到學(xué)校和社會(huì)各界的一致好評(píng)。曾先后在省級(jí)、國(guó)家級(jí)報(bào)刊發(fā)表論文一百多篇，現(xiàn)擔(dān)任《英語(yǔ)周報(bào)》《英語(yǔ)輔導(dǎo)報(bào)》《學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)》《英語(yǔ)畫刊》《英語(yǔ)園地》等多家報(bào)刊的特約編輯。

1.優(yōu)點(diǎn):

本文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，條理清晰，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，過渡自然。

2.需要修改的地方：

①my改為me。teach sb.English意為“教……英語(yǔ)”。

②to take改為taking。insist on后加動(dòng)名詞，意為“堅(jiān)持做……”。

③my改為the。習(xí)慣上有些動(dòng)作發(fā)生在身體某個(gè)部位時(shí)，用the而不用所有格。

④去掉into。enter=come into，不可與into連用。

3.評(píng)分：

按中考英語(yǔ)作文滿分15分的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，本文修改前可得12分。