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Last summer， I went to work as a volunteer teacher in a small village， that is located in the south of our country. The children there were

which

all from poorer families， so they didnt have nice clothes to wear or

poor

enough food∧eat. They had to do much housework as our parents had

to their

been gone to work in cities to make money. Although they live a hard

lived

life， they were eager to learn less about the outside world. When asking

more asked

about their dreams， they said they hoped they could return to their small villages after graduating from college. Thus， they can make their

village

hometown more beautifully.

beautiful

One possible version：

Dear John，

Im writing to discuss with you about how to make friends.

Everybody needs friends， so how to make true friends is very important to anybody. To make friends， the most important thing is that you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are always sure to get a smile in return. Besides， never judge a person only by his appearance. Whats more， you should think more of others than of yourself.

Always remember， a true friend is the one that is coming in the door while everyone else is going out， as the saying goes， “A friend in need is a friend indeed”.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ping

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Dear Ron，

I am very exciting to hear that you are coming to our school soon.

excited

Now let me to introduce our school to you. Our school is a famous

school with∧long history. We have lots of experienced teachers and

a

excellent equipments. There are two teach buildings， one for seniors and

equipment teaching

the other for juniors. There is too one lab building and one dorm building.

also

Beside Chinese， maths， English， physics or chemistry， we still have some

Besides and

electives. The students can choose wherever they like to attend. We love

whatever

our school. I am looked forward to meeting you soon.

looking

Yours，

Linda

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Here I am going to share my favorite book with all of you in class. The book is My Life Story， which was created by an American writer—Helen Keller.

It described her hard struggle to become an outstanding writer and educationist. In the book， she wrote that she hadnt been able to see， hear or speak since the age of one year and seven months. When she was seven years old， she knew Miss Sullivan， her good teacher. Then， Miss Sullivan helped her learn how to write words. Later， she wrote and published many famous works in her life.

I like the book best because it shows us a universal truth： Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it！

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When I was a senior student in high school I had∧teacher called

a

Mary. She taught English but she really had an important effect to me.

and on

She was full of love and enthusiasm. She has our class make poster and

had posters

hang them around the school. She taught we that one act of kindness

us

could go a long way. However， Mary passed away just a couple of years before after a long battle with brain cancer. Ill never forget how a

ago what

wonderful and sweet lady she was. I am truly blessed to have been

known her. I am going to be a teacher like her and Ill always

remembering her kindness.

remember

One possible version：

Dear Tom，

Im glad you trust me and tell me about your trouble. I shall be pleased to talk over the matter with you.

As we know， getting on well with our classmates is very important. The harmonious relationship between classmates makes us in a relaxed mood， which in return has a great effect on our study.

As for the shortcomings your classmate pointed out， I think you should critically accept them. If you do have the shortcomings， you should thank your classmate， and then correct them， which can help you do better in the future. For something like “too thin” or “too short”， just ignore it. In addition， youd better have a talk with him/her.

I hope my advice will prove more or less helpful.

Yours，

Li Ming

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We were having such a bad weather in London. Robert suggested

spend the Christmas week in an Italy seaside town we had visited in the

spending Italian

previous summer. We thought this idea over∧a day or two and then

for

made up our mind to go. When I asked my brother whether I could lend

minds borrow

some money from him， he advised me not to go somewhere at that time.

anywhere

But he finally agree to help me. And he gave me some advices and

agreed advice

information about our trip from London to Italy， or the type of clothes to

and

take.

One possible version：

The Value of Time

A proverb says， “Time is money”. In my opinion， however， time is even more valuable than money. When money is spent， we can earn it back. But when time is gone， it will never return.

It is a pity that there are a lot of people who dont know the importance of time. They never realize that wasting time is equal to wasting part of their valuable life.

As students， we should make full use of our time to do useful things. We should spend most of our time on our studies. Moreover， we should get into the good habit of saving time.

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Are you afraid of snake？ If you are， youre not lonely. But farmers

snakes alone

like them. Thats why they eat insects and mice which eat a lot of crops.

because

They protect crops indirectly. Snakes are covering with hard and flat

covered

pieces， which feel dry and coolly. Many snakes look like the things

cool

around them. Some snakes have brown bands， that look like the leaves

which

that had fallen to the ground where the snakes live. But others do have a

have

bright bands， which∧black， red， yellow， or white. When a snake grows，

are

its skin comes off. Sometime you can see it on the ground.

Sometimes

One possible version：

Dear David，

Thanks for your letter. You asked me something about the music in my life. Let me tell you briefly.

I like many kinds of music， such as classical music， Chinese folk music， and American country music， but my favorite music is light music. Whenever I am in trouble， the soft melody will make me feel relaxed.

Modern popular music such as hip-hop， rap， blues， and rock&roll; isnt my cup of tea. It is too loud and very difficult for me to understand！ I cant stand the strong beat， which nearly makes me mad！

In conclusion， music plays a very important part in my life. Just like meals and sleep， I cant live without music.

Yours，

Wang Hua

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Our school newspaper is looking at an editor for its English edition.

for

The job mainly include two parts. One is to choose suitable English

includes

articles from other newspaper， magazines or the Internet for us students.

newspapers

The other is to pick out articles from those written by the students in our school and edit them for useful. We hoped that the person could meet the

use hope

following requirements： First， he is willing to devote some of his spare

time to serve others. Second， its necessary for him to be good at both

serving

English or fine arts. Beside， the ability to use the computer is not

and Besides

important. Those who are interested in the job， please get∧touch with

in

the Students Union this week.

One possible version：

After-class Activities

Nowadays， after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.

In our school， there are various kinds of activities， for example， arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge， they also free me from the heavy work of study.

Here I have some suggestions. To students， youd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you； to schools， they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.

Dear friends， please take an active part in after-class activities to make your school life colorful.

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Keep a good habit is very important. But I am a little lazy. Lazy

Keeping

people usually felt it is hard to keep a good habit. A week ago， I went to

feel

play the basketball with some of my classmates. It was already about ten

oclock when I got home. I was tired and went straight to bed instead∧taking a bath first. The next morning， we went to take a bath

of I

and then went to school. However， it was cold that morning so I didnt

and

dry my hairs. I got a cold. I felt terribly the whole day and I started to

hair terrible

regret what I had done. If I had taken a bath immediate as I got home， I

immediately

wouldnt have got a cold. See， a good habit are really important.

is

One possible version：

As more and more people use the Internet to chat or communicate， a new thing called Net Language comes into being.

I prefer to use Net Language. First， Net Language is simple and convenient. I can express my feelings and opinions directly and easily. Second， Net Language can make peoples communication interesting. For example， 3Q means “thank you”， and OIC means “Oh， I see”.

But we should view Net Language critically. Some of the useful Net Language may stay alive. After all， Net Language is not regular， which can only be used in certain areas. We should use normal language in our daily life especially in public places and the media. We students shouldnt use Net Language as written language in our compositions.

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Dear Tom，

I was glad to hear from you but I would like to tell you anything

and something

about health. Yesterday we had an activity about health problems and a

famous nutrition expert∧invited to give us a lecture. The expert spoke

was

of some terrible illnesses as well as their reason. By show us some

reasons showing

pictures， he explained the serious diseases caused by eating too much food with lots of fat， oil， and sugar. They learned more about the dangers

We

of junk food through an activity. After the lecture， we had a heat

the heated

discussion. We decided to say goodbye to junk food and took more

take

exercise to make our bodies much more stronger than ever. I hope you

can tell me more about your story.

Best wishes，

Zhang Lei

One possible version：

Music or Noise

Recently， some people did morning exercises to music early in the morning， which dissatisfied other people. They complained that the music， like loud noise， disturbed their sleep.

As we all know， music plays an important role in our lives. Music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Listening to light music also makes us feel happy and comfortable.

However， as the saying goes， every coin has two sides. Music at wrong places or time may be noise to others， especially with your loud music. If your music becomes others noise， it can destroy your relationship with your neighbors.

In my opinion， people may do morning exercises at other places or at other periods of time. In one word， whatever we do， we should think about other peoples feelings.