昝金玉

As we all know， the most important thing in the life is our attitude towards it， tons of men have tried different ways of treating life. I'm a middle school student， I have my own idea about the life. I face my life with a positive attitude. I usually get up at 5：30 every day， start my study and life of a day. I'm also worried about my grades， but the life should be full of happiness. I should study hard now， save the happiness for the future. I'm going to have a very important exam in May next year， which will be a turning point in my life. My parents always complain that I am so lazy， but I just like to live in my own way. I will do my best for my future. In the face of life， I should keep positive and optimistic attitude . I hope I can get a good grades in the exam to reward my life.

簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：

該生的作文，語(yǔ)言通順，能用積極的態(tài)度來(lái)闡述自己對(duì)生活的看法并且為之付出努力。在作文中，該生不僅用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、將來(lái)時(shí)，而且還能用賓語(yǔ)從句、非限制性定語(yǔ)從句來(lái)表達(dá)自己的思想，是一篇不錯(cuò)的學(xué)生作文。

指導(dǎo)教師：楊 萍