李子怡

Hello， Everyone. I am a school girl. My name is Sunny. I am very thin. I want to be strong. So I eat much food every day. I like milk and eggs for breakfast， because they are healthy. I think vegetables are good for my health， so I have vegetables and rice for lunch. As for dinner， tomatoes and potatoes are good food. And I eat them for dinner. Some beef is necessary， so I eat beef sometimes. The fruit is yummy. I have it after dinner every day. These are my eating habits. I think I have good habits， what about yours？

【簡評】小作者從自身實際出發(fā)，通過分析自己的身體狀況，須要多吃健康食物來增加營養(yǎng)，因此從營養(yǎng)早餐、健康午餐、清淡晚餐三方面對何時吃水果、蔬菜、肉以及牛奶等多方面加以分析，養(yǎng)成了均衡的飲食習(xí)慣。文章以自我介紹開頭引入，最后拋出問題給他人，引發(fā)讀者的深思，是一篇注重實際、安排合理、表達(dá)清晰的優(yōu)秀范文。

指導(dǎo)教師：周玉芝