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Steamed rice is the commonest food for Chinese and served almost everyday. It is prepared with various ingredients to enrich its tastes. Fried rice is my favorite. Now let me tell you how to make it！

First， you should steam some rice. This step is important， for it determines if the rice is delicious. Next， cut some vegetables like carrots and onions into pieces. You can cut up some sausages， too. Third， heat two spoonfuls of oil in a pan. Then， add the chopped vegetables with a teaspoon of salt and pepper. If you want your fried rice more appetizing， you can also put in some beans， corn and a scrambled egg， and start to fry. After doing that， add the steamed rice and mix everything together. When you finish these steps， turn off the gas， and you can enjoy your fried rice！

Do you love cooking？ Are you interested in making fried rice？ This is my method to make fried rice， whats your own way of making rice dishes？

【簡評】本文是一篇說明文，小作者用精煉的語言描述了做炒飯的過程。作者用了first， next， after doing that等詞匯使得說明過程清晰，邏輯合理。此外，長短句的結合使用使得文章可讀性較強。英語的說明文寫作重在結構合理和語言準確。本文的小作者做到了這兩點。作為一名七年級的學生，能寫出這樣一篇優(yōu)秀的作文實屬難得。如果能夠再多一些句式的變換文章會更加精彩。

指導教師：安虹