猴子也過(guò)美食狂歡節(jié)，你聽說(shuō)過(guò)嗎？

So many fruits to eat！ But they are for monkeys. This is the Monkey Buffet Festival in Thailand. It is in November every year. People in Bangkok make monkeys go to a temple（寺廟）. Then they give fruits and vegetables to the monkeys. This festival is to thank monkeys， because they bring visitors（游客）to this place.

甜蜜的兵馬俑巧克力，你要不要也來(lái)一口？

In a hotel in Xian， people made these little soldiers（士兵）with chocolates. Terracotta Warriors（兵馬俑）are wearing Christmas hats and look cute. There are about 300 Christmas warriors and horses in all. What a delicious Christmas！

他是一位《吉尼斯世界紀(jì)錄》的狂熱粉絲，來(lái)看看他的收藏吧！

His name is Martyn Tovey. He is 57 years old. Over 40 years， the British man has collected（收集） 353 Guinness World Records books. He is a super fan and set a world record for the biggest collection. At school age， Tovey got a Guinness book as a prize. He became interested in facts and data（數(shù)據(jù)）. Now he knows a lot about Guinness world records.

South Korean actor Kim Woo-bin（金宇彬）doesnt think he is handsome. In his own words， his face looks like a dinosaur（恐龍）. But it doesnt stop him attracting（吸引）a lot of fans.

He has played many cool young men on screen. They look like a bad boy but have a good heart. Choi Young-do（崔英道） in the 2013 TV series（電視連續(xù)劇）The Heirs（《繼承者們》）is a good example.

Kim used to think “l(fā)ooking cool” was important for acting. Hed often look in a mirror（鏡子）to find the coolest expression.

But one day he read a book called Im an Actor. In the book， one actor said： “If youre sincere（真誠(chéng)的）， the right expression will come out by itself.”

Kim said since then， he has stopped looking at himself in a mirror. “Instead I try to find the best emotion（情感）for the situation.”he said.

習(xí)作原文

My favorite book is Today Im the Flag Raiser. In the story， the lead character is a clever boy called Xiaoxiao. He is a primary school student. He wants to be a school flag raiser. You think this is so easy， but in fact， its not easy. When he can?achieve his dream， teacher?tells him， the other?student will be the flag raiser. He is so sad， but he doesnt lose confidence. In the last week of primary school， he raised the national flag. This story told me never to give up on your dreams. You must work hard achieving?it.

修改稿

My favorite book is Today Im the Flag Raiser. In the story， the lead character is a clever boy called Xiaoxiao. He is a primary school student. He wants to be a school flag raiser. You think this is so easy， but in fact， its not easy. When he is about to achieve his dream， the teacher tells him another student will be the flag raiser. He is so sad， but he doesnt lose confidence. In the last week of primary school， he raised the national flag. This story told me never to give up on your dreams. You must work hard to achieve it.

作文點(diǎn)撥

本文講述了作者最喜愛(ài)的一本書的主要內(nèi)容，并從書中得出了“永遠(yuǎn)不要放棄夢(mèng)想”這一主題。文章敘述得有條有理，結(jié)構(gòu)安排恰當(dāng)，是一篇很好的記敘文。但個(gè)別詞語(yǔ)的用法需要注意：

?can表示“能夠”，是百分之百可以做到的，而從下文可知，主人公沒(méi)有做到，所以此處應(yīng)用is about to，表示“即將”。

?teacher在此是特指，所以前面需要加定冠詞。

?the other表示兩者中的另一個(gè)，即總共只有兩個(gè)人；another指“另一個(gè)”，即很多人中的另一個(gè)。

?行為動(dòng)詞后接動(dòng)詞時(shí)，通常用動(dòng)詞不定式，此處用to achieve表示目的。